A Christ Mas Gift

He became what we are-
      so we could be His kin

He became what we are-
      to ransom us from sin

He became what we are-
     to make us what He is
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Nice piece Brian, testament to your faith >> James
Hilliker Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 12:47 AM
Nic write. Keep writing!
Culverhouse Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 4:24 PM
great tribute!! helps to increase my faith today. thanks for sharing
Maughan Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 7:15 AM
Blessed is He! Awesome tribute! Blessings for 2010! Hugs Always, Robin
Mckenzie Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Brian~ A Wonderful inspirational poem everyone needs to remember! Love Laura :)
Goff Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 7:58 PM
blessed truth! Brian! BRAVO! jmg
Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 7:43 AM
Lovely piece Brian, may i say a Merry Christmas to you and your family, and laterly -thank you for my placing in your excellent contest >> James
Jordan Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 4:38 PM
Wonderful poem Brian soooo true is every line - Brian I hope you have a wonderful Christmas my friend - If I may ask a favor - i want to enter your new contest but I don't know the form and its not listed under "poetry Forms" could you please give me an idea - Thank you and God Bless, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 6:53 AM
Thankxxx for your encouraging comments and well wishes in all my contest entries... enjoy your holidays... holydays... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 7:40 PM
Great Christmas message!
Delacroix Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 7:08 PM
Awesome Brian! Another challenge for me to try; the Kyrielle. Great composition and great and true message. Thanks for sharing and thank you for honoring me in your contest. Merry Christmas! Caroline.
La France Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:53 PM
I believe also, Brian, in God's love... and thanks so much for the honour of selecting my poem, No End, in your contest Christmas Parlour Poetry
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 3:04 PM
Thankxxx Brian for your comments on my poetry tonight... I have already entered your new contest.. may I say, U ARE THE MASTER OF POETRY SOUP CONTESTS... please don't ever stop challenging our minds and pens..appreciate your choice of my Parlour Poetry poem... that was so fun to write ... like the spaceship contest by Matt and now your new contest... when I am ready to sponsor one I am heading straight for u to guide me... OK? luv..
Gorelick Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 1:30 PM
Wonderful Xmas message from a wonderful friend and poet. thank you. BG
Owens Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 9:22 AM
This is so wonderful...Enjoyed reading...Marty
Johnson Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 9:09 AM
And aren't we blessed that He did? This is nice Brian. I will send you my address but I don't know how to do it. I can find my soup mail but I don't see how I get to others except to answer. Sorry. Can you help me out? Thanks for your contests. Its fun to try to see how I stack up. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 8:36 AM
Such an inspiration you are with your writings of faith and love. Merry Christmas dear Brian to you and your family! Love, Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:45 AM
He became what we are, because we could not fathom, that we were what he is, God's never ending anthem. He became what we are, to reinforce the claim, That all can be as He is, that ALL Goodness has a claim. Light & Love Handsome
Nutter Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 4:31 AM
Truer words have never been spoken. Excellent write Brian.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 4:27 AM
And a new fav of mine this Christmas Gift is... perfect words Brian... just perfect... hope everyone who reads is touched and moved to get to know HIM>... blessings... luv.... Linda-Marie..
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December 23, 2009 at 3:31 AM
That is love too the fullest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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