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A Child's Home

A child's home Running in the courtyard when sun is at its peak, Harsh voice of grandpa as he would sneak, Long hours with friends as play doesn't tire, Books don't fascinate and mother spits fire, For watering of the garden we are in a queue, Hand pump crackles with a rusty hue, Dining room fragrance as mother cooks my fav, Jealous are others favouritism is nothing new, Oh the bedroom I share with my bro and sis, Cartoon time please spare TV remote I crave, Sound of train passing by as window panes rattle, In sleep I travel afar to return to wake up alarm, Who likes to leave early for lessons at school, No time for splashes that I cherish in the pool, Recall the greater aplomb in my childhood home, No worries, no enmity purity at heart, integrity, Memories chase dreams in morning screams, When croaks the raven, child's home is a heaven! Written Sept 22nd, 2015 For Verlena's contest Awarded 1st place win

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Date: 10/23/2015 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations, my friend, on your amazing first class win! Brings back great memories to me of my own childhood home! Pandita
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:19:00 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 10/21/2015 8:41:00 AM
I really like this poem. Congratulations on your win, Upma. Janice
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:47:00 AM
Hi Upma! Congratulations on placing top with this poem that's bursting with imagery. // We were a big family (7 chdn) and we had a lot of fun, especially when staying at grandfather's windmill and farm. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/18/2015 5:09:00 PM
Stopping back to read your poem again and to congratulate you on your fine win, Dr. Upma! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:44:00 AM
Dr. Sharma, I really enjoyed your entry. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:27:00 PM
Truthfully penned the reality of sharing! Congrats Upma on your first placement!
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:52:00 PM
Great memories of your childhood. I'm from a large family and learnt how to take turns. Best wishes for your success in the contest Dr. Sharks. Well detailed. A 7.
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Date: 9/24/2015 8:17:00 PM
Love the comprehensive imagery you paint of your childhood home, Upma. You have very nice memories so nicely expressed. All the best in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/24/2015 8:02:00 AM
Nice memories for me here Upma...and thanks for the comment...Peter.
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Date: 9/22/2015 10:50:00 PM
You did a great job with your childhood home poem. Hope you are a winner!
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Date: 9/22/2015 3:37:00 PM
thou far from when childhood did end the battlements of yore i still be friend such words as writ above did lend a helping hand to revisit and mend whence psyche rent asunder tend did to severe prepubescent strife by me late mum, thus the poet doctor upma a. sharma did allow memories to get jarred.
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Date: 9/22/2015 2:21:00 PM
You have described your first home with masterful imagery that one can imagine all the scenes, Dr Upma. Thank you for your visits and good luck! hugs!
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