A Change Has Come Over Him

adoring soaring boring snoring He sure was adoring, soaring date -- Though he's now a boring, snoring mate!

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/29/2019 9:42:00 AM

lol Good one Gershon. I can picture it happening :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2019 10:30:00 AM

It's not too hard to picture, is it?! :) gw

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/29/2019 9:35:00 AM

lol...but oh so true...time to pour cold water over his head.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2019 10:29:00 AM

Either cold water, or hit him over the head with a pot! :) gww

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2019 10:53:00 PM

A mysterious transformation all too common. LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2019 10:28:00 AM

Ha, ha. Some mystery! Once the man has what he wants,... LOL. ~ gw