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A Cautionary Tale

A girl called Lucy loved to trumpet lies And idle gossip laced her lips with ease. Tall tales tripped off her tongue to tantalise Those twitching ears which reddened by degrees. This filled her honest Mother with despair ‘You wash your mouth with soap’ she often cried. Young Lucy shrugged it off and did not care - To those who would do likewise, woe betide! One day, when she’d amassed an eager crowd Who circled round to hear the latest slur, She stood there in the limelight, feeling proud, When suddenly a fly buzzed near her ear. How everybody gaped to see it dive Right into Lucy’s mouth poised open wide, Then heard her splutter, gasp and vainly strive To cough it up - she choked and promptly died! The moral of this tale is do not lie; When tempted move your upper lip down south. Then Lucy’s fate will surely pass you by, Nor fly, nor lie invades a fastened mouth. 18.08.19

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Date: 9/28/2019 1:20:00 PM
You brought the fun. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/19/2019 3:46:00 PM
Wow, that was really clever and so well written. I'll have to remember that when I see something hovering around my head. Really cool Wendy, best wishes in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 8/19/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Chris. I wouldn't have chosen to end with the last line had it been purely my input but it was the compulsory 'punchline' for the contest. It brought back memories of that dreadful 'Matilda' by Hilaire Belloc!
Date: 8/19/2019 3:05:00 PM
OMG Wendy! I love it, I love it! Love the humor you injected and I also love the moral of your story! This poem is simply superb and should surpass the others to take top honors! A fave from me! : ) xxoo
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Wendy Watson
Date: 8/19/2019 3:57:00 PM
As always, thank you for your valuable and kind input, Connie. Glad it gave you a buzz!!
Date: 8/18/2019 10:35:00 AM
Well done...I like it
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Wendy Watson
Date: 8/19/2019 3:58:00 PM
I really appreciate the time you invest in reading and commenting, Arturo. Thank you.

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