A Cautionary Tale

A girl called Lucy loved to trumpet lies
And idle gossip laced her lips with ease.
Tall tales tripped off her tongue to tantalise
Those twitching ears which reddened by degrees.

This filled her honest Mother with despair
‘You wash your mouth with soap’ she often cried.
Young Lucy shrugged it off and did not care -
To those who would do likewise, woe betide!

One day, when she’d amassed an eager crowd
Who circled round to hear the latest slur,
She stood there in the limelight, feeling proud,
When suddenly a fly buzzed near her ear.

How everybody gaped to see it dive
Right into Lucy’s mouth poised open wide,
Then heard her splutter, gasp and vainly strive
To cough it up - she choked and promptly died!

The moral of this tale is do not lie;
When tempted move your upper lip down south.
Then Lucy’s fate will surely pass you by,
Nor fly, nor lie invades a fastened mouth.


18.08.19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:20 PM
You brought the fun. Congrats on your win.
Green Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:46 PM
Wow, that was really clever and so well written. I'll have to remember that when I see something hovering around my head. Really cool Wendy, best wishes in the contest.
Watson Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Chris. I wouldn't have chosen to end with the last line had it been purely my input but it was the compulsory 'punchline' for the contest. It brought back memories of that dreadful 'Matilda' by Hilaire Belloc!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:05 PM
OMG Wendy! I love it, I love it! Love the humor you injected and I also love the moral of your story! This poem is simply superb and should surpass the others to take top honors! A fave from me! : ) xxoo
Watson Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:57 PM
As always, thank you for your valuable and kind input, Connie. Glad it gave you a buzz!!
Michael Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Well done...I like it
Watson Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:58 PM
I really appreciate the time you invest in reading and commenting, Arturo. Thank you.
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