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Written 10 June 2025 for Out on a Lim Poetry Contest of Joseph May

A Cat Gulping a Bat Amazed I was to see my cat Embracing in her mouth a bat Thrice the size of a lark, Gulping it in the dark: At close sight it was a big rat.

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Date: 6/15/2025 7:21:00 AM
And life goes on Krishnanand. LOL Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/14/2025 11:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/17/2025 12:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear poet for appreciating the write and for its placement in your contest. Wishing you a pleasant day.
Date: 6/14/2025 9:28:00 AM
Back with my congrats to you in the lim contest
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/17/2025 12:04:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear poetess and cheers.
Date: 6/11/2025 9:12:00 PM
Quite clever, both the cat and you ! You have composed a clever limerick. All the best dear friend....
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/12/2025 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating the write. Cheers.
Date: 6/11/2025 12:55:00 PM
Gross but interesting one!!!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/12/2025 12:24:00 PM
Thanks and cheers.
Date: 6/11/2025 12:04:00 PM
hello Gaptar I found this to be funny. When I pictured this scene in my mind. Blessing my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2025 12:24:00 PM
Hello Guptar, You are very welcome. I found it funny. Blessing my friend. /Darlene/
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/12/2025 12:18:00 PM
Thank you friend for appreciating this write. Limericks are meant to be funny, humorous and a fantasy. Chees

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