A Castle of Temptation - Collab With Ja Fraser
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***thank you so much James for another collab with you.. I had fun writing this poem with you in real.. we deliberating each line.. finding the words to fit our theme.. Im so pleased of the outcome.. =') Remember prior to this contestbeing posted, I already am asking you for us to write one as I likee the two pics of this castle you posted in my fb... =')
A CASTLE OF TEMPTATION
Proudly standing amidst three lochs, verdant hills
a Castle enciente breathing beauty but sadly chants
passed feuds sparking battles having harried their foe
and it's demise caused by Frigates cannonball screams.
Colonel MacRae-Gilstrap rebuilds now redeemed:
stoned arch bridge supersede the sea highway flow,
circular stairs and ceilings with coat of arms grants
changes made but its history today remains still
Tourists not deterred by ghost tales scary extreme
But await they exercise for imaginations to show
the setting, a romantic reincarnation that enchants
attracted lovers to celebrate their matrimonial thrill
Eilean Donan Castle in its stunning reachable location
pose the Western Highlands of Scotland a temptation.
Written by: Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Andrew Fraser
8:46 pm; August 18, 2015
Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015
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