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A Cabin In the Wilderness

I saw a cabin in my dream, Beside it ran a shimmering stream, Along the pathway lilacs grew A tree-lined meadow filled the view And near the wall a rough hewn seat Inviting me to rest my feet. The elegant guests who came to call Wore furs or feathers - and were very small Careless of time, at dusk or dawn They liked their lunch served on the lawn, Like any gracious host I spread A snack of nuts and bits of bread. This place of peace I'd longed to find Restored my soul and eased my mind. It's just a dream, I must confess, Some day I'll find it nevertheless, My cabin in the wilderness. Phil Organ

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/16/2020 9:00:00 AM
Lovely poem, Phil. It reminded me of my friend who painted me my very own cabin in the wilderness and I look at it too relax.
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Phil Organ
Date: 2/18/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank you and I hope my poem helped you to relax.
Date: 2/10/2020 3:38:00 PM
A place for hopes and dreams. Very well stated. Thanks for sharing.
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Phil Organ
Date: 2/18/2020 1:13:00 PM
You're welcome and thank you for the nice comment.
Date: 2/10/2020 3:34:00 PM
I loved the cabin you have described. It is so so serene and beautiful!
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Phil Organ
Date: 2/18/2020 1:10:00 PM
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/9/2020 10:37:00 PM
dream there the words come as graceful wilderness!// wonderful
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Phil Organ
Date: 2/18/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thank you your comment is appreciated.
Date: 1/16/2020 1:33:00 PM
Hello Phil Organ, this cabin in the woods sounds like a peaceful place to be. perhaps one day you will find this special place. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/28/2020 1:48:00 PM
Hello Phil Organ, as i read this poem I felt like i was near the cabin. Enjoy your day my friend. Welcome to Poetry soup.
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Phil Organ
Date: 2/18/2020 1:05:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day.

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