A Butterfly's Ballad In the Faraway Land

I get a glimpse of you A soft hue of light lavender rising in my dawn gliding fervently in sun-kissed breeze An ephemeral beauty enchanting the depths of these caramel eyes flaunting your gossamer wings in whimsical ballad sprinkling ethereal dew upon the embers of my heart And I feel it,a florescent flutter tickling my bare shoulder a slight inhale of fragrance's breath lingering within my thought chasing the back of my neck,teasing in wistful wonder My blushed smile preserves the moment Of your tender brush across the silk peach of my cheek Of your fervent kiss fading in evanescent bliss and unspoiled warmth of ardent touch upon my hair My heart capture the seconds till those iridescent wings fly high in sheer splendor to crimson blossoms which bloom,which sway which bleed and bend,which wrap their thorns around my feet,around my hand So,I would not follow dreams'coloured pastels So I would not run to you,and I would not find you by Spring's muddy gardens,in the faraway land. Contest : ' In the Faraway!!!' sponsored by G.Veneto Inspired by love and nature Written by- Charmaine Chircop

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/15/2014 6:07:00 AM
awesome write , what a gift you have to paint an amazing picture with words,,,love it
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:07:00 PM
Congrats to the Italian Princess!...Kind of ironic concerning my comment on your latest huh? - Tim
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Date: 1/28/2014 9:54:00 AM
So dreamy, charming, full of longing and bliss a wonderful experience to read. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/28/2014 9:50:00 AM
What could be more beautiful than this??? As one reads, it is if we are swept away on wings of loveliness....Way to go, Charmaine!!
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Date: 1/28/2014 5:22:00 AM
Congrats Charmaine on a fine win,, a beautiful poem you wrote,, enjoyed it! love ..gautami
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:36:00 PM
wow. look at you GO, butterfly. All the way to the top of the winners' list. BIG congrats ,my friend, on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/27/2014 5:38:00 PM
Congrats on your great win...Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2014 12:07:00 PM
- I can remember I've read this before - BEAUTIFUL! - Congratulations on your well deserved first place in the contest Charmaine !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2014 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Charmaine ! Well deserved top win! Congrats!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:49:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem on In the faraway contest and congrats on the win, Charmaine
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Date: 1/13/2014 12:13:00 PM
Very beautiful write i enjoyed reading it today, and thanks for your review of pink it meant alot. cheri
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:16:00 PM
CHARMAINE! You have such a sweet tender heart! Your writings always touch my soul! What a poetess! Love, Jack XOXOXOX
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Date: 11/25/2013 6:04:00 AM
Splendid write. Delicately sensual. Just like a butterfly in flight.
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:31:00 AM
fluttering beautiful piece
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Date: 10/28/2013 1:04:00 PM
my, my charms...enchanting write with delicious hints of sensuality done with finesse... you delight!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:52:00 AM
such a delightful flight with this one Charmaine xx
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:16:00 AM
- A pleasure to read your beautiful poem today, Charmaine ! <3 it !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2013 7:34:00 PM
Beautiful..enough said. BG
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Date: 10/27/2013 7:25:00 PM
For those friends who stopped by my previous poems today..I thankyou..and I apologize for not having time t comment on your poetry today but I was able to log only for a short period of time.Hopefully i ll have time tomorrow..Big hugs -Charma
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