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A Broken Person

A balloon colorful beautiful yet fragile, Had what been given to me in the form of life; I liked it; loved it; cherished it; made it agile, Lived it fully happy whole with my loving wife... More than job or money or wealth or power best, I had a dreamed of a family heavenly; Whole soul sober just like that of a sparrow's nest, Where passing to the skies gave feelings divinely... Of all relations, I have cherished here on earth, I loved my little daughter who'd been my princes; Dear little beautiful butterfly with great mirth, She had been the joy of greatest of all riches... She painted flowers as though smiling just truly, Birds of her crayons seemed as though ready to fly; Her conversations like silver streams fell jingly, Her imagination seemed like every time high... It's then I did not know where did the call come from, Encephalitis, the doctor said, O, what curse! Why should my child suffer something that made her numb? Why should fate pick on a little saint so much worse? Years have passed yet my pains have never gone at all, Emptiness like a dark room seem to fill my mind; Heart, broken; mind, restless; to her, I always call, Having all yet my soul lost no solace I find... 30 June 2021 A broken person Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 7/26/2021 12:37:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. It's my prayer that by the Lord's grace, your brokenness has been healed. God bless you.
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Date: 7/25/2021 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Alex, you deserve it with this wonderful poem
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Date: 7/25/2021 9:46:00 AM
The lose of a child never leaves us Chris. Your poem is written with an eloquent grieving. Congratulations on your win. Always in my prayers. Sending you blessings of consolation even now.
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Date: 7/25/2021 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An Amazing story/write yet so sad. I am so sorry. May God bless you.............
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Date: 7/24/2021 10:57:00 PM
Heartbreaking. Surrender to Gods will is the only way. ~ congrats on your win
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/24/2021 11:31:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/24/2021 4:55:00 PM
Congrats. So poignant and heart breaking.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/24/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/29/2021 10:49:00 PM
This is really sad, Christuraj, my heart goes out to you...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/30/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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