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A Broken Love Story

heres a story about a girl who lived the perfect life everything was good everything seemed right until she fell in love fell is just the perfect word for it because it happened so suddenly so suprisingly she couldnt stop herself from letting these feeling overwhelm her control her but once she fell in love with this boy who loved her with all his heart she couldnt help but fear she feared the future the unknown she asked her self "what if?" what if he doesnt love me? what if he leaves me? what if he find someone else? what if this is all wrong? she let the fear eat at her overwhelm her and destroy her untill the beautiful lovely strong girl she once was was gone and teh perfect wonderful life she had was turned upside down but as this fear destroyed her it could not touch the love she had for that boy her heart remained as full and inlove as it had that day her eyes first fell on to him he had no clue no idea what was happening to the one he loved until she left she left behind her heart and the love that refused to die she told him that he may keep that love keep her heart but with it he could not stop stop thinking about that girl the one who had stolen his heart and made him so happy but he kept her heart her love safe inside his own because he knew if he killed her heart and ended that love that bond niether of them would ever stop crying

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Date: 3/9/2009 2:11:00 PM
nice poem. . had tears in my eye. . loved it!. . best wishes ~Breana~
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