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A Broken Heart

A lovely lass stands alone, High atop a cliff Over looking the sea below. The fine mist rising, ever rising, Until she can taste the salty air. . . Until it seems to penetrate her very soul. There is a quiet beauty in the morning light That can not be described; Only felt. . . only if alone. Alone to contemplate the magical music Of the pounding surf; The song of seagulls as dawn's light Comes spilling through the clouds. Outstretched branches of near-by trees Seem to convey their love. Pretty little wild flowers Slowly open their petals When kissed by the morning sun. Dew drops covering like Dancing diamonds in the wind. The colors permeate her body, Deep within. With faith renewed She finds a gentle peace, A healing that takes place To mend a broken heart. She begins to feel lighter than the mist, Freer than the birds in flight; Softer than the petals enfolded by The boundless love of nature. . . So freely given, so freely taken. Problems are washed away by The streaming sunlight; The morning air as it Gently caresses her hair. The energy of mother earth Is there taking care. . . Her loneliness disappears into a warm Loving feeling of universal belonging.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Connie,, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:12:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Connie!
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Date: 2/16/2010 1:37:00 AM
It is no wonder this won--congrats Connie :) This is just hauntingly beautiful...
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Date: 2/7/2010 3:01:00 AM
Wow! Connie, this is beautiful, so enjoyed by your friend Simone
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Date: 2/3/2010 11:04:00 PM
Caroline, My name is Connie . . .Brian just made a little typo and called me Corinne. Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my poem A Broken Heart. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:53:00 PM
Very beautiful write, its imagery is awesome! Corinne. Your poem reads like a book. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Also welcome to the Soup. Will come back to read more of your work. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:12:00 AM
Corinne thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:35:00 PM
Hey Connie, Congratulations on your poem winning 3rd Place in the contest! Good job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:58:00 PM
Your imagery is very graceful in bringing this story to life, Connie. Starting with the broken hearted, untill the loneliness disappears into the warm Loving feeling of unit of belonging as one. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations Connie. A spirit refreshed in this splendid work... well written.....Margaret
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations Connie for your win in the Faith contest. Very well deserved. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations Connie on your 3rd place win in The Rambling Poet’s “Faith” Mini-Poetry contest with these words. Your creativity has placed you in the winners circle. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Connie on your great win here with this lovely poem of faith and hope.-certainly well deserved -Robert
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Date: 2/1/2010 2:11:00 AM
Congratulations on a third place win, in my contest, Faith, with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:22:00 PM
Connie. You capture the essense of life splendidly in this poem. The imagery is wonderful. The idea of giving and receiving is displayed with eloquence. You're truly talented. David
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Date: 1/31/2010 10:21:00 AM
connie, I really want to sit and enjoy this one, but I am running very late for church. So I will come back. Thanks for reading my poem today. I think people think I am writing about myself. I hope you realized it was not really me, just a small bit based on me. LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:45:00 AM
You had me worrying for her, Connie. splendid imagery of the senses. I do so love happy endings! I could picture this on the Hawaian cliffs. Well done. Robert
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:31:00 AM
Great descriptive piece , Connie , and you are correct ; hearts DO mend .....
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:00:00 AM
Very touching.
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Date: 1/30/2010 11:27:00 PM
Beautiful and vivid detail. Nice write.
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