A Broken Heart

A lovely lass stands alone, 
High atop a cliff
Over looking the sea below.
The fine mist rising, ever rising,
Until she can taste the salty air. . .
Until it seems to penetrate her very soul. 
There is a quiet beauty in the morning light
That can not be described;
Only felt. . . only if alone.

Alone to contemplate the magical music
Of the pounding surf;
The song of seagulls as dawn's light
Comes spilling through the clouds. 
Outstretched branches of near-by trees 
Seem to convey their love.
Pretty little wild flowers 
Slowly open their petals
When kissed by the morning sun.
Dew drops covering like 
Dancing diamonds in the wind.

The colors permeate her body, 
Deep within. With faith renewed
She finds a gentle peace,
A healing that takes place 
To mend a broken heart. 
She begins to feel lighter than the mist,
Freer than the birds in flight;
Softer than the petals enfolded by 
The boundless love of nature. . .
So freely given, so freely taken.

Problems are washed away by 
The streaming sunlight;
The morning air as it 
Gently caresses her hair.
The energy of mother earth 
Is there taking care. . .
Her loneliness disappears into a warm
Loving feeling of universal belonging.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 24, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Connie,, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:12 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Connie!
K. Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 1:37 AM
It is no wonder this won--congrats Connie :) This is just hauntingly beautiful...
Segal Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 3:01 AM
Wow! Connie, this is beautiful, so enjoyed by your friend Simone
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 11:04 PM
Caroline, My name is Connie . . .Brian just made a little typo and called me Corinne. Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my poem A Broken Heart. Blessings, Connie
Delacroix Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Very beautiful write, its imagery is awesome! Corinne. Your poem reads like a book. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Also welcome to the Soup. Will come back to read more of your work. Best wishes, Caroline.
Strand Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 3:12 AM
Corinne thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Haick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 10:35 PM
Hey Connie, Congratulations on your poem winning 3rd Place in the contest! Good job! Peace, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Your imagery is very graceful in bringing this story to life, Connie. Starting with the broken hearted, untill the loneliness disappears into the warm Loving feeling of unit of belonging as one. Sincerely, love, Moses
Foster Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations Connie. A spirit refreshed in this splendid work... well written.....Margaret
Johnson Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations Connie for your win in the Faith contest. Very well deserved. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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February 1, 2010 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations Connie on your 3rd place win in The Rambling Poet’s “Faith” Mini-Poetry contest with these words. Your creativity has placed you in the winners circle. Smiles, Dane Ann
Dufresne Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:54 AM
Congratulations, Connie on your great win here with this lovely poem of faith and hope.-certainly well deserved -Robert
La France Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 2:11 AM
Congratulations on a third place win, in my contest, Faith, with this beautiful poem.
Fringe Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 9:22 PM
Connie. You capture the essense of life splendidly in this poem. The imagery is wonderful. The idea of giving and receiving is displayed with eloquence. You're truly talented. David
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 10:21 AM
connie, I really want to sit and enjoy this one, but I am running very late for church. So I will come back. Thanks for reading my poem today. I think people think I am writing about myself. I hope you realized it was not really me, just a small bit based on me. LUv ya, Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 4:45 AM
You had me worrying for her, Connie. splendid imagery of the senses. I do so love happy endings! I could picture this on the Hawaian cliffs. Well done. Robert
Kelly Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:31 AM
Great descriptive piece , Connie , and you are correct ; hearts DO mend .....
Palli Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:00 AM
Very touching.
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:27 PM
Beautiful and vivid detail. Nice write.
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