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                                December 5th 1941 ~ December 22nd 2022

It was coming up for Christmas in the town of Soup Creek Everyone was in good spirits and they had been all week Jenna's saloon was very busy and Tania was about to sing Folks had to stand and Jenna wished she had more seating. Tom glanced over to the gambling table at an empty chair Normally Milt would be playing his hand but he wasn't there Mayor Tom felt quite uneasy; something just didn't feel right Milt sat down at the gambling table had been a familiar sight. Ranger Dave and Deputy Terry came in and stood at the bar They'd come in to hear Tania sing and Tom play on the guitar After they'd finished Tom then asked Dave "where did Milt go"? Dave said "he was out of town and had gone down to Mexico". Christmas came and went but of Milt there was no clue Folks were getting concerned now; he was long overdue Then came a telegram from a small town in West Virginia The operator in the telegraph office handed it to Anaya. She said I'm passing the mayor's office so I'll hand it to Tom Who looked quite puzzled and wondered who it was from Tom opened it very slowly and then he nearly fell back It said Milt had passed and he wouldn't be coming back. Tom went to see Sheriff Koplin to show him the telegram He read the news in disbelief and he muttered "oh damn" " Get over to the square and let the townsfolk know" he said "Times getting on so ring the bell or they'll all be in bed". Tom rang the town bell loudly and everyone gathered around It was noisy then Tom raised his hand and there wasn't a sound Tom said " I've got some bad news about someone we hold dear " And then there was loud gasps and sobbing and many a tear. Tania and Deb stepped forward, and started singing abide with me Then the townsfolk joined in it was a touching sight to see It was late evening and crickets chirped as the sun went down A bright light had gone out forever in our peaceful frontier Town. The saloon will be closed tonight as Soup Creek grieves in sorrow Jenna said she had something to do and would open again tomorrow Milt's chair would be removed from the gambling table on the floor And raised up to the balcony in his honor, to be sat upon no more. Milton was chuffed to be part of the Soup Creek story and I wrote this poem to honour him. The last stanza was written by Jenna Logan (Sleep well Milton, we'll never forget you.) Written on 29th December 2022.

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Date: 1/20/2023 2:21:00 PM
Quite an unusual tribute to Milt. He will be missed and not just on the Soup.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/20/2023 11:07:00 PM
Thank you ML, Milt was always a bright light on here, so supportive of everyone. He'll be sorely missed. He loved being part of the Soup Creek story and I've renamed it Milton in his honour. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Date: 1/9/2023 1:00:00 PM
Tom, beautiful well done poem, Milt will be missed, Constance
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Date: 1/9/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Constance, he certainly will, he was so supportive on here and a great inspiration to us all. Tom
Date: 1/7/2023 11:17:00 PM
Hank was so faithful to me, he commented on every single poem every single day; I could not wait until he returned from Mexico. But he is with his beloved Deborah, so I am willing to let him go. This was sweet Tom. Very touching!
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Date: 1/8/2023 3:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Caren, he was so supportive of his fellow poets and soup isn't the same without him. Tom
Date: 1/3/2023 8:48:00 AM
Such a fine tribute to Milton, with lovely rhyme and flow throughout Tom, superb pen! Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 1/3/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Gordon, he was well liked on here and was very supportive of his fellow poets. Happy New year, hope it's one of good health and happiness. Tom
Date: 1/2/2023 10:35:00 AM
Indeed, he will be greatly missed, Tom. A sad chapter in your ongoing saga.
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Date: 1/2/2023 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, a sad day for Soup and indeed Soup Creek, he loved being part of the story. 2022 was a sad year for Soup, with Connie, Rico and Milton passing. Hope 2023 is a better year for us all Tom
Date: 1/2/2023 9:58:00 AM
- I hold this community close to my heart ... a touching chapter in the Soup Creek story, Tom - hugs
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Date: 1/2/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, Milton enjoyed being part of the Soup Creek story, I'm sure he would have approved of this one. Tom
Date: 1/1/2023 3:41:00 AM
Beautiful, Tom, Milt would have loved it, and given you a shout of "whoopie"!! Do convey my New Year wishes to Jenna too:)
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Date: 1/1/2023 3:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo, I know Milt was happy to be part of the Soup Creek story and I couldn't think of a better way to honour him. I'll certainly pass on your good wishes to Jenna. Tom
Date: 12/31/2022 7:28:00 PM
A fitting tribute, Tom. (Hope you've groomed an understudy for Milt.) Keep the Faith, Gershon
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Date: 12/31/2022 11:58:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon, the town committee will meet in the new year. Must be able to play poker, deadly with a. 45, GSOH, and supportive to others, if someone has these qualities please step forward. Tom
Date: 12/31/2022 6:55:00 PM
This is a true PS tribute Tom. I can see him smiling :)
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Date: 12/31/2022 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Flo, I'm sure he'd give us the the tumbs up. Happy New year. Tom.
Date: 12/31/2022 5:26:00 PM
Tom, so sorry to have come late to this smashing write. So many great tributes to Milt these last few days and this is right up there with the best of them. Terry
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/31/2022 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Terry, I know Milt loved being a part of the Soup Creek story and I couldn't think of a better way to honour him. Tom
Date: 12/31/2022 3:33:00 PM
Clever and heart-rending. Milton surely would have enjoyed your tribute. Milton will be greatly missed
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Date: 12/31/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Robert, I always looked on him as one of the founding fathers of Soup Creek, he loved being a part of it. Happy New year to you. Tom
Date: 12/31/2022 8:45:00 AM
A touching tribute to our friend and a great poet, L.Milton Hankins! We all will miss him! Rest in Peace, Dear Friend.
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Date: 12/31/2022 3:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Mala he's certainly left a void on here so supportive to his fellow poets, he'll be sorely missed. Happy New year. Tom
Date: 12/31/2022 4:26:00 AM
A supreme tribute to an outstanding poet and Man. His departure took me by surprise and my heart really felt the pain. Your work is worthy of him. The soup will be poorer and all will miss him. Rest In Peace our immortal friend. Congratulations to the creators of the tribute. Blessings.
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Date: 12/31/2022 4:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, soup has lost a fine man and talented poet, he was always very supportive of his fellow poets and he will be missed, the only consolation is he's reunited with Deb his dear wife. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 10:57:00 PM
Many will miss him. A great tribute to a versatile poet. RIP.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/30/2022 12:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, he was a big part of soup and so supportive of his fellow poets. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 9:59:00 PM
Tom and Jenna this farewell Poem at Soup Creek was very touching and heartfelt. Your combined words touch us all of Milton's departure. I still like many are in schock. As you know I was away and I briefly stopped by and found out Rico had left us to. Then I saw your blog and i was in disbelief. Like you have said the only good thing is that he is with his beloved Deborah. Thanks for sharing Tom you and Jenna. Milton is looking down and saying thank you Dear friends...
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Date: 1/1/2023 8:16:00 AM
Yes Tom 'Chuckling" was a phrase he used lol and your right he would play it off as it was not a big deal. You knew him so well Tom your comment reflects that. Smart man you are my friend...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/30/2022 12:43:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, it was a fitting tribute to Milton, who everyone held in high regard and Soup Creek won't be the same without him in it. I'm sure he's looking down and 'chuckling' wondering what all the fuss is about. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 6:09:00 PM
In what moving way Soup Creek has reacted to the passing away of Milton. Mayor Tom announced the sad mews to the gathering who stood shocked and in utter disbelief. Jenna's act of moving Milton's chair to the balcony to honor him has been quite appropriate. Altogether a touching piece of verse. Milton will be greatly missed. Thanks Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/30/2022 12:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa. I still can't believe he's left town never to return. He's left a void on here for sure and will be sorely missed. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 5:34:00 PM
Dear Tom and Jenna, this poem from the heart is such a beautiful and moving tribute to a wonderful man who meant so much to so many here. Indeed, "A bright light had gone out forever in our peaceful frontier Town." Jenna, your last poignant stanza shines the eyes with tears. A big fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/30/2022 12:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Susan, things will never be the same on here, he was a bright light on soup and very supportive of others. It was a no brainer when Jenna sent me that last stanza. Happy New year to you. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 2:33:00 PM
Tom, a beautiful tribute to Milt, I have tears in my eyes reading this. It was both sad and wonderful. Jenna, the ending is very fitting and does honor him, so well done! Milt will live on forever in his poems and our hearts. Thanks for including me in this. A fav for me as well.
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Date: 12/29/2022 2:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Tania, I know Milt was chuffed that he was a member of the Soup Creek story and I couldn't think of a better way to honour him. The final stanza written by Jenna was the icing on the cake. Thanks too for faving it. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 2:13:00 PM
A wonderful/great~write/story/tribute. Jenna did a great ending. He will be missed. Blessings.............
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 2:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Paula, he'll be missed for sure, was so supportive and friendly with everyone on here. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 12:37:00 PM
Tom, this is the sweetest thing ever you have done in Milton's honor. I'm tearing up again. But it will never be the end because we have Milt's poems over and over again. Hugs Tom ~Anaya
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Date: 8/30/2023 9:39:00 AM
†****************†**************†*************†*********† Back to say your touching re-post has reminded us of a souper trouper, dedicated to only support and help other soupers. Milton really enjoyed your Soup Creek poems, Tom. He is remembered today!!!
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Date: 12/29/2022 2:48:00 PM
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 1:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Anaya, Soup Creek was a metaphor for shady goings on in poetry soup can't believe how it grew and Milton was a big part of it. Thanks too for faving it. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 12:01:00 PM
This is very touching Tom. We townsfolk are grieving his loss, it is so unbelievable. I love your installments of Soup Creek, this beautiful site does feel like a close-knit community, and we certainly lost one of the key officials. Tears are shed all over Soup Creek at his loss. This is a beautiful tribute. Well done Mayor <3
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 12:58:00 PM
Thank you very much BJ, I still can't believe that he's no longer with us, he had such a warm friendly personality and had time for everyone. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 11:17:00 AM
Wow, incredibly well done you two! I guarantee you that he is very pleased with this outstanding tribute. I’m so proud to see so many paying their respects for this wonderful man. This is very touching and beautiful!! Thank you Tom, Jenna and Milton for sharing your amazing pens with us!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 12:55:00 PM
Thank you very much Mark, he was so well liked and had time for everyone here. It's certainly a darker place without him. Have read his last poem a few times and it's as if he knew he'd be leaving town. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 10:50:00 AM
Hello Tom, this is a lovely tribute to Milton. Yes he will be missed on Poetry Soup. R.I.P. Milton./Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/1/2023 2:55:00 PM
Hello Tom, you are welcome. I am well thank you. How was your Christmas? All the best for the New Year. Enjoy your evening.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene, he was well liked and very supportive of his fellow poets. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 9:47:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to Milton - Tom, he is certain to be sorely missed on PoetrySoup and Soup Creek too. God bless you Milton, sleep in heavenly peace… Belle
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Belle, he had time for everyone on here and so supportive to those that needed it. Tom
Date: 12/29/2022 8:57:00 AM
I have no doubt that Tom and Jenna have created a great tribute. A lamentable poem was written in Milton's honor. Milton would be pleased to learn that he is held in such high regard; he exhibited a great deal of personality when he supported many individuals on this website and, in some cases, beyond. He will be sorely missed by everyone. My thoughts are with his loved ones and close friends. RIP Milt.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/29/2022 9:00:00 AM
Thank you very much Lasaad, I'm sure Milton would have given it his seal of approval, he loved the idea of the Soup Creek saga and he was a big part of it. He'll certainly be missed on here by everyone. Tom
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