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A Bright Future

Pretty sailboats glide in molten sun
toward a new gold horizon


Written on 3/7/2023
For: A New Crystalline - Any 
Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Good to see it on the winners' list. Sara
Buehler Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Thank you so much, Sara. :)
Kitchin Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Evelyn, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely crystalline!
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, Tania, and for the honor of a win. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Lovely! Congratulations, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. :)
Fowler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:36 AM
I love sailing Evelyn. I'm on your boat here. Congratulations! :)
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Glad you liked it, Linda. Thank you. :)
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 5:52 AM
- Lovely ... enjoying this view, Evelyn :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
DiMino Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Now that is quite a capture of image and words. Love it!
Buehler Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much, Joe.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Shining golden poem in brevity wow! Kudos great poetess! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too"
Buehler Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Thank you very much. :)
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:44 PM
I like the theme of newness, of 'advancement.' Pure gold! :) gw
Buehler Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:39 AM
I appreciate that, Gershon. :)
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Lovely poem, Evelyn. Your imagery is great as well as your picture. Good luck with the contest.
Buehler Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:08 AM
Thank you very much for your kind compliments and good wishes.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:41 AM
Great photo. Lovely poem so full of imagery.
Buehler Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Your comments inspire and delight. Thanks.
Rolland Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 6:58 PM
so vivid and lovely, great "painting", thanks yann
Buehler Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:00 AM
So glad you liked it, Yann. Thank you.
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