A Breeze That Soothes

A Breeze That Soothes

Have you ever sat in shade of tree on hot, hot day?
  thinking only of easy street and islands far away
Suddenly in midst of this pleasure Nature sends a treasure
  a breeze so cool that it sets your soul to measure

Then several nice soft clouds floated right into view
  giving the breeze a lift with even more shade to you
Such moments are so special and often so very rare
  like a journey with a jackpot just waiting there!

One I remember that lazy day I found her looking for me
  dancing my way with eager eyes that promised to please
O' that sexy body and those sweet, sweet sexy moves
  "Her",  a breeze that gives such love, love that so soothes!

Gifting of a gentle , sweet and newborn spiritual soul
  rescuing me , angel melting our hearts into a loving whole!

Robert L. 05-27-2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/12/2024 6:04:00 AM
My, my! Where are you hiding these days, Robert? Time to resurface
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Date: 12/2/2016 7:12:00 AM
I tracked down your first sonnet (on the soup that is) and as impressive as it is, I think your later works (or more recent) are rather more refined with more depth! I hope you don't mind me saying so. Have you a favourite of yours that you have done? Or two or three? ha
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/2/2016 2:23:00 PM
"Have you a favourite of yours that you have done? Or two or three?" A Dream That Came True. She A Princess God Hath Made As Midnight Moon Shines Upon Her Eyes Shades of Poe , Speaketh The White Stallion Arrives A Golden Steed Gallops The Birds,They were so Silent The River Laps Softly The Woodland Goddess These off the top of my head but ask another day and it may be another entirely different group. I have written well over 3,000 poems in my long life.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/2/2016 10:47:00 AM
Ahh yes, that is an older poem that I changed to a sonnet by writing two additional verses. I did not change the original twelve verses to meet syllable count. Why should I when adding a closing couplet did the trick? I do not mind, actually prefer my friends to always state what they think with no worries of my being offended.. Truth is its own great reward.
Date: 5/28/2014 10:13:00 AM
Hi Robert, This was lovely. It spoke of gentle life that we need. I loved the nature voice and the imagery. Classic my friend:~) Thanks for sharing this Gem with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/28/2014 11:12:00 AM
My friend that is a very good reflection of my intent when writing. Thanks for sharing your insight..
Date: 5/27/2014 11:19:00 PM
This is cool and breezy poems. The soothing feeling of your words is so relaxing. I love the twist in the end. Great pen.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/28/2014 9:04:00 AM
So very kind of you to say . Thanks..
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