A Breeze Ballet

A single orange leaf
twists and turns 'bove vibrant vales -
espying a shadowed glimpse
of nature's palette as she sails.
A variegated dreamer
drifts beyond a wooded realm -
'tween doughty boughs of balsa
floating o’er oak and elm.

She glides along the gleaming glens 
with bewitchery and charm -
fingertips slowly dance and dip
as she whispers in Fall's arms.
A silent soaring sonnet
soon greets her tinctured friends;
atmospheric art is born
as their colors braid and blend.

A masterpiece of chroma
gently lures the naked eye -
leaves of bronze and yellow
decorate a midday sky.
An orchestra of colored flags
sing passed a closing eve - 
now its time to bid adieu
and thus, each stipule leaves.

The orange leaf then slumbers
underneath a yawning sun.
Her wings have gone to sleep,
my friend, for her breeze ballet 
is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fisher Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 11:35 AM
This is a wonderful piece - many congrats on your well deserved win. Rgds Janette
Milgate Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 11:18 PM
This is really nice, flowing; moves like the leaf.
Butler Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 9:17 AM
This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on your well deserved win. -Mike
Crisci Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations on your first place with your magnificent poem, John. Have a Happy Easter with your loved ones. God bless you. Love and admiration, Andrew.
Strand Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Easter greetings John.Just to say I airmailed your pize this morning.Rgds Brian
Villarosa Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 1:51 AM
A1 for this, John. Congratulations on your being first place on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 1:57 PM
very beautiful poem, I see this ballet before. you have brought it to life again.
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Love when you write lyrically like this! congratulations. Andrea
Richards Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 1:06 PM
Once again, I must say it!! No one can fill your shoes....this magnificent poem proves it!! :) Congratulations, John...another mezmerizing piece from your pen!
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:56 PM
Congrats for the first place. Fine imagery and rhyming
White Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 6:34 PM
Like a symphony, nice job John Congrats
La France Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Beautiful, congratulations on first place in the contest... love Constance
Johnson Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 9:48 AM
beautiful work. Well deserved win. congratulations. Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:48 AM
A fine win..I love this poem..it really is an orange poem..wonderful. Congtrats. BG
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:48 AM
A fine win..I love this poem..it really is an orange poem..wonderful. Congtrats. BG
Murphy Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:40 AM
congrats on your win in this contest very nice write faleshia
Strand Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:30 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest John..Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'APRIL FOOTLE' is now open.If you care to confirm by soupmail if the forwarding address I have on file is still okay to use I will airmail your prize after the Easter hols.
Strand Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 12:09 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian.Trust you are now fully recovered
Golden Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 5:22 PM
I absolutely love this, John. Autumn is full of beauty, as is this poem. It is now among my favorites. Sincerely, Donna G.
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:28 AM
John - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Christie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
Strand Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 12:01 AM
Congrats on you success in Christy/Nigel's contest.John Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Nice title and congraulations with your Honorable Mention...Raul
Mckenzie Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 2:02 PM
John my friend Congratulations on a wonderful write and win in the contest! Laura :)
Winter Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Christie and Nigel's contest. It is a beautifully written ballet. Love, Shar
Swanson Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 10:44 AM
I thought this was very beautiful! My favorite part: atmospheric art is born as their colors braid and blend. Pure poetry! :) God bless and congrats on your win! :) Amy
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