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A Breeze Ballet

A single orange leaf twists and turns 'bove vibrant vales - espying a shadowed glimpse of nature's palette as she sails. A variegated dreamer drifts beyond a wooded realm - 'tween doughty boughs of balsa floating o’er oak and elm. She glides along the gleaming glens with bewitchery and charm - fingertips slowly dance and dip as she whispers in Fall's arms. A silent soaring sonnet soon greets her tinctured friends; atmospheric art is born as their colors braid and blend. A masterpiece of chroma gently lures the naked eye - leaves of bronze and yellow decorate a midday sky. An orchestra of colored flags sing passed a closing eve - now its time to bid adieu and thus, each stipule leaves. The orange leaf then slumbers underneath a yawning sun. Her wings have gone to sleep, my friend, for her breeze ballet is done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/14/2010 11:35:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece - many congrats on your well deserved win. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:18:00 PM
This is really nice, flowing; moves like the leaf.
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Date: 4/5/2010 9:17:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on your well deserved win. -Mike
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Date: 4/3/2010 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place with your magnificent poem, John. Have a Happy Easter with your loved ones. God bless you. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 4/3/2010 8:08:00 AM
Easter greetings John.Just to say I airmailed your pize this morning.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:51:00 AM
A1 for this, John. Congratulations on your being first place on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:57:00 PM
very beautiful poem, I see this ballet before. you have brought it to life again.
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Date: 4/2/2010 9:59:00 AM
Love when you write lyrically like this! congratulations. Andrea
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Date: 4/1/2010 1:06:00 PM
Once again, I must say it!! No one can fill your shoes....this magnificent poem proves it!! :) Congratulations, John...another mezmerizing piece from your pen!
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:56:00 PM
Congrats for the first place. Fine imagery and rhyming
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:34:00 PM
Like a symphony, nice job John Congrats
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful, congratulations on first place in the contest... love Constance
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:48:00 AM
beautiful work. Well deserved win. congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:48:00 AM
A fine win..I love this poem..it really is an orange poem..wonderful. Congtrats. BG
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:48:00 AM
A fine win..I love this poem..it really is an orange poem..wonderful. Congtrats. BG
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:40:00 AM
congrats on your win in this contest very nice write faleshia
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:30:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest John..Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'APRIL FOOTLE' is now open.If you care to confirm by soupmail if the forwarding address I have on file is still okay to use I will airmail your prize after the Easter hols.
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:09:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian.Trust you are now fully recovered
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Date: 1/24/2009 5:22:00 PM
I absolutely love this, John. Autumn is full of beauty, as is this poem. It is now among my favorites. Sincerely, Donna G.
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:28:00 AM
John - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Christie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/7/2009 12:01:00 AM
Congrats on you success in Christy/Nigel's contest.John Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/6/2009 3:14:00 PM
Nice title and congraulations with your Honorable Mention...Raul
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Date: 1/6/2009 2:02:00 PM
John my friend Congratulations on a wonderful write and win in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 1/6/2009 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Christie and Nigel's contest. It is a beautifully written ballet. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/6/2009 10:44:00 AM
I thought this was very beautiful! My favorite part: atmospheric art is born as their colors braid and blend. Pure poetry! :) God bless and congrats on your win! :) Amy
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