A Breath of Spring
A breath of Spring renews my grace,
with a drop of dew upon my face.
Lilies bloom in elegant peace,
as my passion for life does increase.
Beauty lingers with pure desire,
and rose bushes bloom in crimson fire.
Swans swim in a reverie calm,
as I feed them bread crumbs from my palm.
Mother nature surrounds repose,
as the pallid daisy gently grows.
Syllable count: 8-9
***howmanysyllables.com counted "bushes" as ONE syllable,
I checked two other sites and they counted it as TWO syllables***
March 19, 2017
Copyright © Lu Loo | Year Posted 2017
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