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A Bourbon Love

A Bourbon Love
Through a glass of bourbon he found her.
Her eyes, Flaming Blue, hiding a glance of Heaven.
Her hair golden like the reflection of an English buttercup, 
Open to the flirtations of the sun.

Her lips soft, pink,
Like the dawn over a distant tulip field,
With a promise to reveal, even more,
Moist, sweet, the taste of a woman.


Her neck, slim, elegant, with a hint of summer,
Jewelled with faint dew drops from the evenings heat.
Her shoulders, graceful, a ballerinas calling 
Perfectly formed, a place for heroes,
To rest their head.

Her arms slender, delicate, with a promise of an angels embrace.
An embrace that could wash away, all your sins.
Her dress clinging to her body, like the lilies in a pond,
Hiding the secrets below.

Her wrist adorned with a single pearl, 
But it is she who is more precious.
No mortal offering could eclipse her.

Her hands soft, with a touch, 
That I would gladly die for.
No ring, dare I wish?

Her legs, long, perfectly formed,
Made to move, like a gentle summer wind,
Caressing the flowers of some meadow,
In a far away dream. Breathtaking. 

When she walked the whole world stood still
She glanced, our eyes met
My soul was stolen,
Engulfed in flames of desire
My heart penetrated, laid bear with a love so rare,
My mind lost in sweet expectation.
 A feeling beyond, any poets gaze.

She smiled, my body quivered
For this moment, I would gladly lead the forlorn hope.
These seconds, I remember them so well.
I was overwhelmed by the closeness of her spirit,
Her presence commanding an invisible audience,
Of stolen glances.
A vision of woman, of such form, such desire
Such love.

Then like a gentle whisper, her body, brushed against mine
, leaving the air perfumed
 Like orchids being carried by a holy dove.

Then my heart shattered, strewn across the floor,
Like yesterdays confetti.
For the smile, was for some one else.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Richly romantic and poetic...with a shattering ending. Such can be life, and love. A fine write. Regards, Robert.
Ball Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Very nicely done my friend. Good storyline and great imagery. Easily read and understood. I like that in a poem. God Bless, JB
Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 1:10 AM
Very dramatic, intriguing and with a twist. Great work Steven. Thank you for reading and commenting on mine. Love, Joyce
Susan Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 12:07 PM
a very descriptive poem. he must have been totally taken with her - love at 1st sight. makes the ending heartwrenching. I love the line "yesterdays confetti" - was this a true story?
Austin Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 12:24 PM
If this is a fantasy, Steve, I want to know what label you are drinking. If this is for real, then I suggest you take out a contract on that "someone else." WOW! Enjoyed. daver
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Oh dear the twist the perfumed bliss, but she just passed on by:) good one mate, Don
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 7:49 AM
awesomely beautiful poetry steven and lilty lines of vivid and vibrant images of romance... enjoyed reading this creative poetry luv..
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Wonderfully Romantic! I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for your kind words I appreciated it
Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Love the twist at the end Steven. I was not expecting that at all. Thanks kindly for reading me, much appreciated :)
Dufresne Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Awesome Poem Steven a romantic poem filled with imagery similes sentiments and irony. Excellent free verse. Keep on writing!
Wesley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 3:19 PM
I meant, how I WISHED I looked like that
Wesley Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 3:18 PM
Oh how I looked like that but then who does? What a sad ending to such a marvellous interlude. Fascinating verse.
Onclaud Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 8:25 AM
oh, i am speechless, steven.. you took my heart away and made it sing , then brought it to the ground with your last line like a sting.. a wonderful element-of-surprise approach!.. a winner all on its own! :) huggs, nette
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