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A Bottle Of Fun

I am out to have some fun,
so is the big bright yellow sun.
Lot's more fun with my bottle of soap,
than my old jump rope.
Bubbles going everywhere,
up~up~up into the air.
There goes some big bubbles,
look there are two doubles.
I had more fun than I can say,
now the clouds are turning grey.
My fun time is coming to an end,
Mom will mix water~soap to blend.
Date Written:9/24/2021
3 Place
Photo # 2
Rhyming Site: RhymeZone
rhyme me rhyme me a poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 10/6/2021 4:44:00 AM
An end that is just starting... Congratulations on a win..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, more mix for more fun. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 10/5/2021 10:54:00 PM
I loved this competition entry, bubbles suggest happiness...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for your note. It is an honor to have a win. I enjoyed writing "A Bottle Of Fun." Glad you love this write. Yes, "bubbles suggest happiness." So much fun in a little bottle. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 10/5/2021 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Paula , in the Rhyme Me Rhyme Me A Poem contest. Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your fun picture write. I enjoyed writing "A Bottle Of Fun." Glad you like this rhyme write. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 9/25/2021 6:52:00 PM
Hello Paula ... never had the experience, but I see how much enjoyment my grandchildren get out of blowing bubbles - thank you Paula - Lindsay
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:37:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Give it a try. Never tooooooo old. It is fun for all ages. Kids love to play with bubbles. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 9/24/2021 5:44:00 PM
An absolutely delightful read - it's very easy for me to imagine this as a children's book. Simple and simply uplifting, brought joy to my smile ... CayCay (or was it smile to my joy? Both work)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Kids love "A Bottle Of Fun" to play with. Have a blessed day.................