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A Boil On the Skin of the World

A Boil on the Skin of the World The surging power rumbles through Molten rock it tends to spew The lava flows though hidden veins We cannot see until land strains Rising like a boil on the skin The inflammation building within Pain and puss explode to relieve The pressure below we cannot conceive A carbuncle on the skin of the world The pressure to burst, mountain tops hurl The lava rising building from beneath The powers of hell waiting to unleash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/21/2012 8:52:00 AM
Oh Boy, or should that be girl.. i do really like these kinds of poems you write, regarding the relationship between different aspects, these are so clever, just love this...
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Date: 2/24/2012 7:45:00 AM
I loved this, Mandy. Such a thought provoking poem. Great message contained too. :)
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Dinda x
Date: 2/22/2012 10:48:00 PM
VERY good description, the analogy of it to a boil!! I used to get boils on my arm , nasty things. and look out when the lava spews out!!!
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:02:00 PM
Mandy, hi!!!! wow... this rushes like lava... hell unleashed...oh! no... what have we done! :-( lol.. ,.. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Have yourself a good night, always* PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:45:00 AM
Mandy i loved this but as i read prince Charles kept popping in my head :) , have a great day Mandy , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:10:00 AM
Wery good Mandy, I like the way you put it. -oxox Anne-Lise
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