Notes About The Poem

A Body At Work

I was working out back, while under the palms
I've a tendon-cy to stand under the limbs
to focus my eyes, and digest the surrounding glands cape
Plantar-d there on the ground was a carpenter ant 
that caught my attention, and that is a fact!

Disarming he was, determined as well
making his way through tall blades of green grass
As hungry as a calf, he had shinnyed himself
He knuckled up under with all of his nerve
Hopped on an iris, like a tropical bird
and began eating his way through small fingers of lumbar 
that was stacked against the rear of the old cellar door

Diget know? .. It was humerus to watch, how he testes his food!
Consuming the wood from the bottom to top
He tendon to stop, to take a deep thigh,
then back to devour,  while munching his lunch.
Lashing away, until his jaws became sore
He must have consumed a whole foot, of lumbar or more!
Prostated he was, till he lymphed to the floor
Tomarrow I'll have only sawdust to store !

Ureter about fables, and stories of ants
They are truly able to eat a whole fence!
Their orbital cavitiy is bladder and bigger
than one might imagine…They've the gall to be pigs !!


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9/10/16
For Contest: Body of Work
Sponsor Viv

Words of body parts used:
back
palms
tendon
limbs
eyes
digest
gland
plantar
digit
arm
blade
calf
shin
knuckle
nerve
iris
fingers
lumbar
ear
cell
humerus
testes
bottom
thigh
lash
jaws
foot
prostate
lymph
marrow
ureter
orbital cavitiy
bladder
gall
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Krampe Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. That is a clever way of working in the body parts! Agnes
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 5:20 PM
WOW! such clever use of the words Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Amazing write, Carrie! You went 'outside the box' with your theme and long list of body parts. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 7:59 AM
wow Carrie! Amazing poem! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Congrats Carrie, for your WIN with this brilliant work!!! ;-)
Wigley Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:29 AM
Well done, Carrie, an opus! Viv x
Mark Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 2:48 AM
To say this doesn't work is a phallucy ! ...jst saying....Ian
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 11:42 PM
This entry is so clever and unique Carrie! I bet Viv will appreciate every word! I imagine I will see this in the winning circle my friend! Outstanding! ; ) 7
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