A Blue Ribbon

I didn't take my umbrella, assuming
the weather wouldn't respond with a whiplash,
and on coarse sand I trudge, not thinking
of a cloudburst to induce fear and suddenly bash.


My grip on this balloon string has the strength of a cord,
in case those clouds belch and belie...
luckily its rapid ascent is not beclouded,
and the flight's climax holds my attention to excite me.


Floating balloon, don't let me off this cloud nine,
keep going further up until you are set free,
and that cloudburst, drunken with sunshine,
will not hinder your enthusiasm and make you bleary.  
 

Slowly come down, and I will catch you blithely,
as you bob, boasting a new win with a deflating burp,
crashing in my folded arms, to snuggle you contentedly...
here's a blue ribbon, weary balloon, for all the mirth.   


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 8:12 PM
What a very very interesting presentation. Very unique. A big congrats to you, Andrew!
Fraser Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Catie's fine contest Andrew >> James
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July 18, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest..I enjoyed the trip! BG
Culverhouse Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 5:21 PM
nice, good one
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 10:38 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Andrew. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2009 at 10:49 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Love the metaphoric use here. Keep writing. Sara
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