A Blue Moon

That moon by romancing is made, I never know what people do. But its love light has picked your face. That moon by romancing is made, Sets my fingertips to the day — A night that's between me and you That moon by romancing is made. I never know what people do.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/24/2025 7:02:00 PM

luna always ignires romance...lovely one, paige

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/24/2025 10:57:00 AM

Some lines really shine and touch, all together captivating. CayCay

Tom Woody

Date: 7/24/2025 5:34:00 AM

Now here's a poem I can understand. I especially like the third and sixth line. Romance awaits

Bill Baker

Date: 7/23/2025 9:03:00 PM

Nice romantic Triolet, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/23/2025 7:55:00 PM

' That moon by romancing is made. ' So true, Paige. There's something about that sparkling glow shining down below, that sets such a beautiful mood for lovers. This is so dreamy. :)