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A Bloom Most Noble

The forest moves with its mystic mood, enchanted for the creaking tune of trunks and boughs in wind, sing some birds in spring wild with a learned need; Once the snow had filled all warmth sown in darkly pockets, too thick for footfall and wind gusts upon wings, shaking earth with its plight of iced-glazed tide, now light, is nearer as a lover in tender caress; The core of the world hopeless to begging romance, The waltz of soft warmth from sylvan-spring suns, blue with hearth the sky, and budding the path for the little man, simple in his simple pleasure; Need only of balmy breeze, and she many more things in her university, of neg-lege moods, walking in her windy ways..... Sitting upon the lap of his heart, and babes to bare in the simmering spring; To love kissing truth (holy procreation) blooming melded as white-on-snow, melted for unstoppable glow, of hearts to hold, dear as tear-speckled gold, and the dapples of dreams; In old age the pitter-patter of feet to relieve the lonely, brooding day ---- but the bright of children's eyes, and the laughter in the skies (sing as some birds in spring) when all the world is blooming

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Date: 4/30/2014 7:43:00 PM
this is so blooming creative!!! It's light and wonderful!!!
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Date: 4/30/2014 6:01:00 AM
Dear Keith, Your poetic voice creates magical descriptions of nature. It is such a joy to read your words. I am truly captivated. Perhaps one day we should attempt a co-write. You provide so much inspiration! Love from your fan, Carolyn
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/30/2014 10:50:00 AM
So sweet to say Carolyn, my, my --- I would love to one day co-write with you, it would be an honor! My time is a little busy at the moment; I'm working on a semi-short romantic epic set during the French Revolution, it will likely be in 4-5 parts, once I make some good progress on it, perhaps we can co-write together on some piece of inspiration! Love always, Keith
Date: 4/28/2014 7:19:00 PM
So many great lines and beautifully composed with serenity in nature's backyard. Loved the finale line !
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/29/2014 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Karen! :-) Yes, I liked the final line too, hence the reason why I dropped it!
Date: 4/28/2014 11:46:00 AM
Lovely breeze. Keith, once again thank you for the wonderful stroll. This is one of them kind of poems, where the imagery awakens a beautiful "I MUST HAVE MOMENT,"... It's like having a warm blanket deep inside, A very vivid blooming picture. always... Linda
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/29/2014 9:12:00 AM
Hey wonderful! Long-time-no=see, glad you loved the poem, must check if you've overcome your writer's block.... BIG hugs, Keith
Date: 4/26/2014 1:21:00 PM
beautiful romantic write Keith - hugs Jan x
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Date: 4/25/2014 6:27:00 PM
So beautiful Keith, I love it <3
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Date: 4/25/2014 6:00:00 PM
lovely Keith great pen hugs
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Date: 4/25/2014 5:26:00 PM
we are all hopeless when it comes to the enchantress known as romance. Still as we suckle at her breast our spirits take flight and our futures are born. The next generation will continue to pay her homage and the slavery of our hearts will set us free.
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