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A Blazing Fire

A blazing fire is crackling its refrain as I recall a love, perhaps not sane. Beside this hearth you tenderly caressed my body and we simmered; then we pressed against each other. Heat was our domain! My heart now pulses rhythm with a rain which beats staccato on my window pane. Torrential is the longing in my breast - a blazing fire. The warmth of your embraces soon would wane. You left, but images have seared my brain. . . like you in glow of dancing flames, undressed. I wish with all my soul that I were blessed to have you here again, for I remain a blazing fire

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/24/2014 8:47:00 AM

Andrea This is one hot and sexy poem. Very passionate and loving, blazing with desire. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Not Built Strong Enough poem.

Lily Twinkle

Date: 5/18/2014 11:35:00 AM

This is wonderful indeed! I really love the way you created the imagery, connecting the words.... sleek and smooth.... I could also imagine the blazing love racing red Ferrari... scorching the highways .. Lol ;)

Theresa Stephens

Date: 5/18/2014 11:00:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Congrats on your win. Wow, this poem is sizzling hot, ouch!. Love the passionate renderings throughout. A sure fire winner in any stakes. Regards Theresa xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/18/2014 4:53:00 AM

red hot Andrea full of tender longing congrats on win hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2014 8:05:00 AM

Nothing irritating about this beauty. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2014 7:55:00 AM

I knew this one would be a winner ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/17/2014 7:35:00 AM

Awesome poetry ! Highly inflammable stuff Andrea ! Congrats on a merited top win !

Joseph May

Date: 5/17/2014 6:33:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Andrea...

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/16/2014 10:22:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea. I have never tried this form. Have to look into it. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 8:42:00 PM

Very sensual take on the theme. Congrats on your deserved win, Andrea

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/16/2014 5:31:00 PM

I liked this one as soon as I read it, andrea, (it actually contains very little repetition, perhaps that's why!) you were very shrewd opting for a form that uses subtle repetition! lol sensual, poignant, nice rhyming, and even some internal rhyme too; everything about it read exactly right - congrats on your 1st place win! :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 5/10/2014 12:19:00 PM

Lovely Andrea. GL in the contest. Verlean

Alex Frankel

Date: 5/9/2014 5:20:00 AM

Hi Andrea wow, this is just a perfect poem. A real pleasure to read!

Mel Merrill

Date: 5/8/2014 1:24:00 AM

Andrea, Hi. How are you? I'm glad I dropped by to read this skillfully crafted bit of art. Nicely done, my friend. Kudos. Peace and hugs...~M

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/7/2014 9:17:00 AM

Hi Andrea: I have already commented on this poem but there was no login for a reply. I am aware with your expertise on poetry styles and I did research on the Villanelle form and I'm sure it was correct with the one exception with. The punchline broke the rhythmn of the form but that was my intention. But thanks for caring.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/6/2014 7:29:00 PM

Wow! Favorite image in this passionate piece is "like you in glow of dancing flames". A wonderful entry Andrea.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/6/2014 11:26:00 AM

Wow I am loving this piece you have written Andrea. Wishing you the best in your writing. This will surely be on the winner's list. Love, Carol

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/5/2014 6:41:00 PM

Awaiting passion's warm embrace with memories flames upon your face. A timeless trance into tomorrow. If unrequainted, only sorrow.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/5/2014 4:34:00 PM

Hi Andrea: What else can I say but , "Sensuality alit" beautiful words, my compliments!

Kim Morrison

Date: 5/5/2014 3:09:00 PM

Scorching hot, but quite beautiful. Great write Andrea

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/5/2014 1:00:00 PM

Reminds me of the song - Light my Fire as I am sure you remember from the Doors and Jose Feilciano. Hot poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

Date: 5/5/2014 11:01:00 AM

All I can say is, "This is HOT!" Thanks for the Cinderella ending. Now I add a final touch - and they lived happily ever after. Love, daver

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2014 10:25:00 AM

beautiful passionate write here, my friend

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/5/2014 8:29:00 AM

Wow! Such heat and shimmering passion. Will it help if I toss a bucket of cold water on you? I have to go find my ladies fan to hide the blushes. Every word that flows from your pen amazes me.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/5/2014 8:07:00 AM

this is another awesome masterpiece from your pen, Andie~!!! .. Yes it is indeed irritating!!! ... 'cos this one is so good that I couldn't help not to read so many times!! ,.,hehe... Superb as ever!!! ..:O))