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As the sun slip-slides down blue skies and sets, clouds streaked with pink, mauve, and grey pave the way. And the night is wrapped in a black silk shawl, whose threads slowly snuff out the light of day. As Mars and Venus arrive on the scene, Luna rises to reveal Her pocked face. And twilight dims, setting the stage for dusk, fixed within the fabric of time and space. Clouds of bats swarm out of secluded caves to feast on moths, snatched right out of the air. And while ebony shifting shadows merge, yellow eyes within the gloom seem to stare. And the hoot of a lone owl can be heard; as the lines between day and night get blurred.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/22/2020 1:54:00 PM
Hello Emile Pinet, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hello Emile Pinet, you are so welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. i hope all is well with you.
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Date: 5/22/2020 2:32:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/17/2019 8:44:00 AM
Hey Emile this one is a great poem. I love the descriptive language you use. Bravo. Val Brooklyn Rogers
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Date: 11/18/2019 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Val, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/18/2019 3:31:00 PM
Lovely imagery...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/19/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/12/2019 9:11:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! Loved the metaphor; Black silk shawl! Very unusual!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/13/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Smita, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/12/2019 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations, I enjoyed reading and the finish was superb, Georgia
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Date: 10/12/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Georgia, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/7/2019 9:32:00 AM
Wow Emile, you wrote a captivating sonnet, so excellent the imagery you portrayed, I could see it...visualize it. That's the sign of a wizened poet, the ability to weave words, in this case to a black shawl. Congrats on another win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2019 10:33:00 AM
Thanks so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2019 11:53:00 AM
beautiful imagery, loved this dear Emile, well deserved win! :)-luloo
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Date: 10/1/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Lu Loo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2019 10:24:00 AM
Many Congratulations! A gorgeous poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/1/2019 11:04:00 AM
Thanks P.S., I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2019 9:44:00 AM
You’ve done an amazing job to produce such an atmospheric scene using monosyllables, Emile. I’ve often read great sonnets where the rhyming couplet has spoilt the whole but I thought yours was a wonderful way to end. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Wendy, your words mean a lot to me my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2019 6:57:00 AM
Such a superb sonnet emile, no wonder you grabbed the top spot, many con grats:-)
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Date: 10/1/2019 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2019 12:45:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2019 8:44:00 PM
This is beautiful and deserved a winning spot, Congratulations and bless you
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Date: 9/30/2019 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/30/2019 6:11:00 PM
The entitled flowed through every stanza, with a perfect emphasis in the concluding couplet, encompassing a thoughtful well-written one-word/syllable sonnet, and as such, can only be accomplished by the best, deserving for first place ~ Aloha always William
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/30/2019 8:56:00 PM
William, you honor me sir and I appreciate it very much, thank you my friend you've made my day, Emile.
Date: 9/22/2019 7:55:00 PM
Hi Emile: This definitely feels like a winner!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/23/2019 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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