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Premiere Contest WinnerA Black Silk Shawl

As the sun shimmies down blue skies and sets, clouds streaked with pink, mauve, and grey pave its way. And the night gets wrapped in a black silk shawl, whose threads slowly snuff out the light of day. As Mars and Venus arrive on the scene, Luna rises to reveal a pocked face. And twilight dims, setting the stage for dusk, fixed within the fabric of time and space. Clouds of bats swarm out of secluded caves to feast on moths, snatched right out of the air. And while ebony shadows shift and merge, yellow eyes in the gloom seemingly stare. And the haunting hoots of an owl are heard, as the line between day and night gets blurred.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Hello Emile Pinet, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Hello Emile Pinet, you are so welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. i hope all is well with you.
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 2:32 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Hey Emile this one is a great poem. I love the descriptive language you use. Bravo. Val Brooklyn Rogers
Pinet Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Val, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Michael Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Lovely imagery...
Pinet Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kulkarni Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Beautiful imagery! Loved the metaphor; Black silk shawl! Very unusual!
Pinet Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Smita, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kereopa Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations, I enjoyed reading and the finish was superb, Georgia
Pinet Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Georgia, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Wow Emile, you wrote a captivating sonnet, so excellent the imagery you portrayed, I could see it...visualize it. That's the sign of a wizened poet, the ability to weave words, in this case to a black shawl. Congrats on another win!
Pinet Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Thanks so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:53 AM
beautiful imagery, loved this dear Emile, well deserved win! :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Lu Loo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Awtry Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Many Congratulations! A gorgeous poem!
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thanks P.S., I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:44 AM
You’ve done an amazing job to produce such an atmospheric scene using monosyllables, Emile. I’ve often read great sonnets where the rhyming couplet has spoilt the whole but I thought yours was a wonderful way to end. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Thanks so much Wendy, your words mean a lot to me my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:57 AM
Such a superb sonnet emile, no wonder you grabbed the top spot, many con grats:-)
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 12:45 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 8:44 PM
This is beautiful and deserved a winning spot, Congratulations and bless you
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 8:53 PM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 6:11 PM
The entitled flowed through every stanza, with a perfect emphasis in the concluding couplet, encompassing a thoughtful well-written one-word/syllable sonnet, and as such, can only be accomplished by the best, deserving for first place ~ Aloha always William
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 8:56 PM
William, you honor me sir and I appreciate it very much, thank you my friend you've made my day, Emile.
Sergi Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Hi Emile: This definitely feels like a winner!
Pinet Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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