A Bit ''Oddball''

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I was a little girl with a tattered ragdoll,
       and I lived in an attic that was not tall;
           in fact, there were parts where I had to crawl.
              I liked to play make-believe till nightfall,
                and write-   so I wrote on the wall;
listening to dreamy gentle rainfall . . .
       and on that wall, oh yes, I did scrawl.
         Then in the morning I heard Mom call,
           she beheld my wall writing in great appall;
             oh yes indeed, it was my curtain-call . . . 
Mom left and returned with a can of spray Lysol.
        I want you to clean it and I mean all,
          and went away muttering- I was a bit oddball;
            so I cleaned it and then lay on my bed, I recall
               crying and holding my tattered doll.


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February 8, 2017

Poetry/Rhyme/A Bit "Oddball"
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Date: 2/9/2017 11:19:00 AM
Oh Constance what a beautiful poem to feast my eyes upon this day. I have and always will enjoy reading your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:11:00 PM
Carol, it is so nice to see you on soup and thanks for the compliment
Date: 2/9/2017 4:11:00 AM
I can picturise the entire scene in front of my eyes, Constance:) this is a sad but amazing monorhyme:)
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:13:00 PM
Jo thank you so much for the nice comment
Date: 2/8/2017 1:40:00 PM
I loved the imagery in your monorhyme Constance I could picture it so vividly:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/14/2017 8:15:00 PM
Jan thank you for visiting and the compliment
Date: 2/8/2017 12:32:00 PM
A lovely rhyme! I totally relate to that young odd ball. 7! & good luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 2/14/2017 8:20:00 PM
Maureen thanks so much for visiting my poem
Date: 2/8/2017 11:47:00 AM
I am very touched by this. Love, a Bit of an Odd Ball.
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Date: 2/8/2017 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, I realized later in life, its okay to be an oddball . . .
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