A Bird of Prey

A bird of prey just made my day.
He perched high up, just sitting.
He looked quite regal, so the height
Was absolutely fitting.

I watched him shake his head a bit,
Perhaps to clear his vision
Of raindrops sneaking through the leaves,
To guarantee precision.

For on the hunt, those eyes detect
The slightest move or quiver,
Allowing an attack with talons
Ready to deliver.

The hawk or falcon (don’t know which)
Remained in place a while,
Then flapped its wings and swooped away
In classic hunting style.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:52 AM
I really like the way you got into his birdbrain " I watched him shake his head a bit, Perhaps to clear his vision Of raindrops sneaking through the leaves, To guarantee precision."
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:50 PM
I got a little queasy reading about those 'precision eyes,' ilene. Seems predator birds can target us people as prey as easily as they can anything else. Chills without the Thrills, gw
Mcconnell Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Lovely pen Ilene filled with nice thoughts of nature along with good imagery and expression. Blessings, Gordon
Leffanta Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Nice ode to a predator! I wish they would visit Honolulu, where they could enjoy a real Thanksgiving of pigeons and doves! Aloha!
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