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A Bird of Prey

A bird of prey just made my day. He perched high up, just sitting. He looked quite regal, so the height Was absolutely fitting. I watched him shake his head a bit, Perhaps to clear his vision Of raindrops sneaking through the leaves, To guarantee precision. For on the hunt, those eyes detect The slightest move or quiver, Allowing an attack with talons Ready to deliver. The hawk or falcon (don’t know which) Remained in place a while, Then flapped its wings and swooped away In classic hunting style.

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Date: 11/16/2021 9:52:00 AM
I really like the way you got into his birdbrain " I watched him shake his head a bit, Perhaps to clear his vision Of raindrops sneaking through the leaves, To guarantee precision."
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Date: 11/13/2021 8:50:00 PM
I got a little queasy reading about those 'precision eyes,' ilene. Seems predator birds can target us people as prey as easily as they can anything else. Chills without the Thrills, gw
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Date: 11/13/2021 8:27:00 AM
Lovely pen Ilene filled with nice thoughts of nature along with good imagery and expression. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:25:00 AM
Nice ode to a predator! I wish they would visit Honolulu, where they could enjoy a real Thanksgiving of pigeons and doves! Aloha!
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