a bird and a boy -
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* In honor and memory of my hero, Walt Whitman *

one day as a boy, I went down to the sea
clambered o'er rocks way out to the bluff
stopping to search in a tide pool for shells
senses awakened by strong, briny smells
warming, the zephyr was gentle enough -
yawning in promise, the sun winked at me.
descending a crag and reaching the shore
I found my prized seat there on an old log
wriggling my toes to delve, deep, the sand
pledging the treasure of shells in my hand
that sunlight and wind would scatter the
fog
and thawing, I took off the sweatshirt I wore.
'twas then that I spotted a bird, scarlet red
a Cardinal, and male, with exquisite feather
perched on a snow fence abutting the
dunes
greeting the day with the saddest of tunes
below in the grasses, ringed by the heather
lay one female Cardinal, silenced and dead.
I stayed there all day, observing that sight -
the male with a canticle, pleading his mate
a sorrow and agony poured from that bird
as mournful a song as these ears ever
heard
I stayed there 'til dusk, the sun bowing late
and still, he continued deep into the night.
I went back each morning to hear that bird
sing
thus crooning all day for his dear love to
rise
the rest of that summer - and even years
hence
with endless devotion he trilled on that
fence
and tho' one sad spring he departed the
skies
I watched evermore for red birds on the
wing.
well ...
I'm old now and weary, but here's an odd
thing:
when winter relents and the warm mistrals
bring
a breeze with bouquets of hopes for the
spring
while I'm biding the black arms of slumber
to cling ...
though it's often dismissed
I so swear, through the mist
‘midst the eve, heaven-kissed
that I still …
hear …
him ...
sing.
( For Walt Whitman )
~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice (32) Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
~ Honorable Mention ~ in the "Your Choice (10) Personification, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
~ 1st Place ~ in the "Specificity In Poetry" Poetry Contest, Sheri Fresonke Harper, Judge & Sponsor.
~ 1st Place ~ in the "Best Rhyming Poem September thru October 2017" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.
(This is a Sextain with a pattern of ABCCBA)
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2017
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