A Better Tomorrow

Clouds on ivory flotilla waver, sailing on serene air in cobalt sky, turned to a fleet of lethal haze of scare, our lives changed as shadows of danger pry. Out of intimate web almost extinct, desolate mind is pained in times of strain. Hope lingers, spurred by survival instinct, cracks in closeness widen, won’t close again. Splendor of sunburst sky I long to see, when black clouds of threat would drift away far, rays of hope through dismal milieu reach me. It’s time to revere the ravaged nature. For the things from our children we borrow, let us gift them a better tomorrow.
September 25, 2020 Syllable count : 10 each line checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : A Better Tomorrow Sponsor : John Hamilton
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Koplin Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 5:01 AM
Congrats on your win!
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 8:40 AM
An excellent write Subimal, I noticed you used near rhymes, I was looking for perfect rhymes so that's why it didn't place higher, good to know for next time, congrats on a podium finish anyway!
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