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A Beggar's Soul

On a corner one day And another the next I pay a high price Just to be in debt As awnings sway And angels pray Keep me safe another day I owe you not now or then But my pain is forgotten Your spoils displayed Decayed and rotten.

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Ayesha Karim

Date: 3/20/2016 11:04:00 AM

I liked your poem. The title is great too.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/16/2016 7:24:00 AM

Hi Malcolm. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/14/2016 6:29:00 PM

Hi Malcolm, Cogratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Moira Cameron

Date: 3/13/2016 10:47:00 PM

Hi Malcolm. I like your poem - though short, it is potent and real. Thanks.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 3/13/2016 9:40:00 PM

An excellent piece of probing poetry.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 10:42:00 AM

malcolm dyer, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2016 10:24:00 PM

malcolm dyer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2016 9:57:00 PM

Malcolm,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Malcolm Dyer
Date: 3/5/2016 10:05:00 PM

Awesome thank you very much.