A Beautiful Tune

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From the lovely melody In a bustling and energetic setting The absence of wind Is my frail haven Please allow me to inquire about the potential Of having a transient love That temporarily fills my heart with bliss. Written: May 1st, 2023

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/2/2023 4:32:00 PM

Find it where you can, my friend. Love is fleeting when we need it most. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/2/2023 5:37:00 AM

Beautiful photo and equally beautiful poem my friend. Enjoyed the tenor of your write.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/2/2023 4:00:00 AM

Lasaad, the thought of a 'transient love' is not one we often read about. I totally understand the concept and appreciated your write.

Valsa George

Date: 5/1/2023 8:43:00 PM

Lovely melodies will flow from us when love fills every fiber of our heart. Why settle for transient love? Let it be a permanent affair to make life one of bliss. Beautiful poem, dear Lasaad.