A Beautiful Encounter Awakens

A Beautiful Encounter Awakens The fire still, brightly burns. The heart still bleeding, yearns to be loving you forever more, to know the pleasures as before. On itself, nothing turns, lost, forever, behind the closed door, wondering ?, what fate may have in store, for one with far to many concerns. B. J. “A” 2 February 1st 2013

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Debra Squyres

Date: 2/1/2013 3:44:00 PM

Tugs remembered strings of thought...nice poem. Enjoyed the read.

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/1/2013 4:10:00 PM

with the past that one finds hard to let go of, either because it was brought to an end before it had a chance to run its coarse or because it may be the last experience of kind . Have a great day Debra . B. J. “A” 2

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/1/2013 4:10:00 PM

Good afternoon Debra, so kind of you t send me a positive comment on my stuff. Thank you so much . Tugs are one thing, but it becomes so much more then memory or thought when one is up-close and personal - in ones arms, side by side doing a project -