"As the setting sun pours colors on the firmament and the evening dresses up in shades of amber, let hearts sing of the beauty of nature and praise the master craftsman who designs everything" ~ By Poet On a beautiful evening, sat by the side of a silent lake. On staring into its still, see- through waters, I saw, Tiny thick lipped gourami, swimming back and forth Flashing their silvery scales in synchronized swings. Swallows were flying to their neat laid nocturnal nests. In the soothing silence, set free of all strife and stress, I forgot myself. The sun had soundlessly set in the west. Copper clouds in chameleon sky were cloaked in cobalt grey.
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