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A Beating Heart

I recall how we once strolled together; how our hands met, firmly clasped, yet gentle, as would two puzzle pieces we fit – Saw the greater picture...the landscape mountains, then down life's slopes, our sparse valleys far greener than others for the closeness we shared. We were a true panorama when it came to matters of love. No Gable and Leigh~ just real, from head to foot. Alive with all scents of leisure and labor, the pungent aroma of the many worldly atmospheres inhaled, we moved as one despite their differences, never alone even when briefly parted. Time, of course, is merely, a soulless counter... oblivious of human passions unregulated. Oh, to give Time a beating heart! Then love would only start, start, and start....

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Date: 2/12/2023 8:17:00 AM
I understand your kind of love adventure. Sara and I have had a similar experience. I enjoyed the read my friend. Bill
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/12/2023 8:28:00 AM
So simple...thank God we get it! Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/9/2023 12:27:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Joe - romantic and just real, from head to toe (foot :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/9/2023 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine; these romantic words are so much fun to write. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/9/2023 8:06:00 AM
A romantic journey through life ! I feel you are becoming more and more a bard of love. Both of you on a leisurely stroll with your hands firmly clasped ! Don't ever loosen the grip. I visualize a happy pair rambling through the vales and hills, holding hands and enjoying the beauty of the magical surroundings. Indeed a delight .... both the experience and the poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/9/2023 8:25:00 AM
Hi Valsa; I love that! "Bard of Love!"~ Should we not all be, when being Bard or simply cleaning streets, reflections of love?! Thank you so much for such an inspiring comment. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/8/2023 3:46:00 AM
wow one of my fav from you, your tenderness knows no boundaries my friend, I am presently writing a short story called "Paper Heart For Sale" if you want to read it let me know, Vie :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2023 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Vie. I try my best to be sensitive and alive. Real. I have many failures. Lots of regrets. Lots of apologies I owe. Now, I would love to read your story! I would be honored.
Date: 2/8/2023 1:27:00 AM
The King of romance. Loved the way you began your life together, with hands entwined. Great poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/8/2023 8:23:00 AM
Hi Victor; coming from an outstanding writer as yourself, a positive comment is precious. Blessings my friend! You know, writing from the heart is less Truth and Honesty, and mostly romance. One who reads poetry, really understands poetry, can tell if love went into the work. Can tell if heart and soul are invested in the write. Shakespeare only wrote with a general vocabulary of about 550 words. Who's counting? Can anyone tell?
Date: 2/7/2023 5:43:00 PM
Hopefully this ill earn POTD tomorrow, it deserves it.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/7/2023 6:05:00 PM
Southwest, Arizona. Been here about 35 years originally from New York.
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 2/7/2023 5:51:00 PM
It is My choice ! Are you east coast or west ? My daughter and her family are west coast and they are 19 hrs behind Aus ATM
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/7/2023 5:47:00 PM
If it is your POTD, that is good enough for me Wen. Thank you my friend. Have a great evening? Day? 8 hours difference I believe.
Date: 2/7/2023 11:27:00 AM
Prince,, you are such a romantic.and not only that,it is an emotionally moving! You paint a melodious portait of you and your Pricess! Breathtaking and a FAV. Pangie xo.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/7/2023 5:26:00 PM
I think all poets are romantic...some more than others, but poetry, music, are languages of the heart. Thank you for your continued encouragement. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/7/2023 10:44:00 AM
I can see the two of you strolling through the fields of the Tara Plantation. What a splendid poem Joe, and then to end such rapture giving time a heartbeat. Imaginative and totally endearing. Has to be a favorite of mine.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/7/2023 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Wen; I can't always write far-out stuff, as I am inclined to unconsciously do -- I think all writers of poetry have a marshmallow heart. Love them!

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