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A Beatiful Place To Be

The creek running so far and wide, It never had a place to run and hide. The creek water, so very clear and cool, Feels so much better than being in a pool. The banks and trees being so very beautiful and green, The most beautifulest place I have ever seen. Walking through that cool and refreshing water, Behind me, here come my mother and father. In this beautiful place there is an old oak tree, Under it on blanket, are my parents and me. The sky is oh so pretty, beautiful and blue, I look over at them and say "mom,dad I Love You". The sun shining oh so very warm and bright, Making this day being so very special and right. Being here with the best people I know, We want to stay here in this pretty place and not go. I want to remember this day as long as I live, This moment, I always want them to give. I will take my one and only child here, Telling her the water is always so cool and clear. If it wasn't such a pretty and beautiful day, This wonderful and pretty place wouldn't come my way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 12:40:00 PM
I'd like to go there too
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:29:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Angela. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:49:00 PM
Well expressed poem. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/13/2010 10:23:00 AM
very beautifully put
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