A Beard of Dust

The old clock had grown
a beard of dust.
The ink in the Underwood's ribbon
long dried in silence.
Frayed tassels of an old desk lamp
hung over the motionless pen.
Gnarled hands etched
the pain of goodbye.
Grandmother's rocker was still.
So was he.

7/3/2020

The Old Scribe Poetry Contest
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Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Your muse is layered with emotions and background tales John. Congratulations on your win!
Kauffman Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Such a mulit-dimensional poem, John. So many vibrant words like dried typewriter ribbon, dust beard (I really like that one), frayed tassels all set the scene and convey the sadness of the picture. Congratulations on your winning placement!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Back with congratulations, xomo
Wolf Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 8:28 PM
I can't say it better than Maureen said it below. This is a superb contest entry, John! Cheers, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Beautifully done, evocative imagery; I think Craig will really like this. My best to you in the contest. xomo
Blown Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 1:03 PM
...very very nice...can see much...it is as a doorway to dimensions unseen that cast this shadow we call a 'reality'...…...…..stan sand
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