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A Beard of Dust

The old clock had grown a beard of dust. The ink in the Underwood's ribbon long dried in silence. Frayed tassels of an old desk lamp hung over the motionless pen. Gnarled hands etched the pain of goodbye. Grandmother's rocker was still. So was he. 7/3/2020 The Old Scribe Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/28/2020 10:18:00 AM
Your muse is layered with emotions and background tales John. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/24/2020 8:50:00 PM
Such a mulit-dimensional poem, John. So many vibrant words like dried typewriter ribbon, dust beard (I really like that one), frayed tassels all set the scene and convey the sadness of the picture. Congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 7/23/2020 2:11:00 PM
Back with congratulations, xomo
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Date: 7/1/2020 8:28:00 PM
I can't say it better than Maureen said it below. This is a superb contest entry, John! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 7/1/2020 1:12:00 PM
Beautifully done, evocative imagery; I think Craig will really like this. My best to you in the contest. xomo
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Date: 7/1/2020 1:03:00 PM
...very very nice...can see much...it is as a doorway to dimensions unseen that cast this shadow we call a 'reality'...…...…..stan sand
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