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A Beacon of Light

A beacon of light to a much hurting world in need ! Can't help but to claim.., Some sense of identity, Stregnth and encouragement only come from above ! Amidst in the distance, the trapped seagull.., Lieth frightened but still yet adrift ! In a most vengeful fashion striking the passing fish, A true source of hope, Yet a most triumphal beam ! This beacon of light shineth forth, Passerby's can err' escape the helping hand.., To the most sparkling of radiance !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/7/2010 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mario in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:57:00 AM
Congrats Mario on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:47:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to the light of your life, Mario! Congratulations on your win in Audrey's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:36:00 AM
The contest is over and you have won..Sara
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:59:00 PM
Dear Mario, My thanks go to you for supporting my contest with this elegant piece written to "The most sparkling of radiance"!!! Most enjoyable! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations Mario on your much deserved win for fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Mario
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations Mario on your win in Amy Green's contest "The Ankh". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:32:00 PM
Good job, and congrats on your HM, thank you for your entry.
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Monsoon Storms" Mario. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2010 1:06:00 PM
Congrats Mario on your HM in the Monsoon contest with this wonderful write for a sweet honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/4/2010 9:24:00 AM
Hi Mario, congratulations on being featured this week. Thanx for sharing. Ernilando
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:41:00 AM
Congrats on the feature, I found this to be a nice poem, I, too, find that animals can inspire.
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Mario on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mario. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/23/2009 4:05:00 PM
wonderful poem! keep going! ------Ell
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