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At daybreak, I approach the beach across a soft hill of clover, past sleeping Pandanus palms, and down a small sand dune. I am enveloped by sea wind. I look up to a flight of swallows - symbol of returning. They occupy the airspace of seagulls. A kookaburra laughs, somewhere to land-ward, bringing fond memories of far off bushland. A Malamute passes beside me, pulling a woman on a long leash. If she had a small sled she could mush along this perfect white beach. Tall lady pines grace the shoreline their skirts just out of reach of sea water. Seagulls sit in small conventions pecking free donuts. They queue up for cups of coffee; I imagine their grey wings tucked through Aloha shirts. A German shepherd lopes, wolf-like, scatters them, they swoop out to sea, laughing. They'll be telling the folks back home of their close call. Now the sun's rays have reached the high rises, awakening diamond fires from glass windows. On the horizon, sunbeams reach down in straight lines like sun-pictures from a child's storybook. My imagination runs wild but my walk has ended, as I climb the wooden ramp - back to the street, alive for what my day holds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/24/2019 4:10:00 PM
Most excellent observational poem. The narrative flows with poetic images. Very cool Suz.
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Date: 7/11/2019 9:47:00 PM
So expressive, detailed, and beautiful. Takes the reader to the beach, too.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/12/2019 4:21:00 PM
This is what my beach walks were like on the Australian Gold Coast. I really miss those mornings. I should find some more of those and post them. I have a whole series of them. Thanks for your encouraging words.SuZ
Date: 7/31/2016 4:18:00 PM
You weave a story quite well.
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Date: 8/11/2013 10:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 6:45:00 AM
Hello Suz , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:18:00 PM
What crystalized images! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/8/2013 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on this featured poem...I enjoyed it tonight..
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Date: 8/7/2013 11:15:00 AM
Suz this is outstanding so glad I read it congrats on being featured shadow smiles (7)
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Date: 8/3/2013 7:30:00 AM
Lovely piece,Suz...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 8/2/2013 5:26:00 AM
I like the imagery in this wonderful write....congrats on a fine win
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Date: 8/1/2013 11:17:00 PM
Suz, .congrats .. LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:36:00 AM
Suz,,, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda
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Date: 4/18/2013 7:55:00 AM
The animals and themes within this work evoke an almost myth-like quality. Great work :)
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:57:00 PM
Wonderful day for you Suzanne, you brought it alive.
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Date: 4/5/2013 9:37:00 PM
Dear Suzanne,Vivid imagery "Tall lady pines,line the shores, their skirts just out of reach of sea water" I live on a mountain with a lake 500 feet behind the cabin, the Blue Spruce's "skirts just out of reach"of fresh wate. I can look out my window and see the Beautiful POETIC Portrait YOU have painted in this Super fine Write.I bow to YOUR talented Pen and the Mind behind it. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 4/3/2013 2:11:00 PM
Dear Suzanne: Fantastic poem! Very descriptive. Have a wonderful day.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/3/2013 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Sheol
Date: 4/3/2013 12:35:00 AM
We often find holiness in the wholeness of everydayness, and your poem fills the soul with the fullness which we often take for granted. Thanks for sharing, Suz. David
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