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A Soul Awakened

There's moonlight swirling into the night; keeping the distant horizon in sight. Under the guidance of glittering dreams life can prove happier than it seems. As one awakens their soul at dawn they realize their sorrows are gone. They've packed up their troubles into the past and come to find their bliss at last. Life can be poetry in motion when love is built on pure devotion. The winds of time die down at last though it seems they roll on by too fast. Yet if you've awakened your soul to love the heavens beckon you from above. The skies embrace you and rejoice; how you carry on now's your choice. written April 13 th, 2013

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Date: 5/1/2013 6:11:00 PM
Hi Deb, congratulations in Gail's "A Soul Awakened" contest.. take care~ LINDA
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Date: 4/29/2013 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this beautiful write. Well done, Deb. :)
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:51:00 AM
Very pretty, congrats on your win. J.
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Date: 4/28/2013 1:11:00 PM
Deb a great couplet. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 4/28/2013 11:39:00 AM
Congrats on your grand win~A.O
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:24:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations deb...knew this was great...
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Date: 4/27/2013 12:31:00 PM
Hi Deb, congratulations for your win, loved reading your poem.Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 4/14/2013 2:55:00 PM
Deb, wonderfully written.....'life can prove happier than it seems'...I love that line...Awesome write! Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 4/14/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Deb, it's gorgeous, written -Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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