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A Jungle Scene

A Jungle scene Lion leaps at prey Loud screams soon give way Chilling stillness drowns Chomping crushing sounds Contest Form Jueju Four lines with Five syllables each(wujue) Date March 21 2017

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/13/2017 4:18:00 PM

Such vivid imagery, Sushma! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 4/13/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 8:04:00 PM

Congrats, Sushma. SEeing it again, I feel it's one of my favorites for the jungle theme.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 4/2/2017 8:30:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words!

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 5:02:00 PM

Sushma congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 4/2/2017 7:58:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2017 9:15:00 PM

oh boy, I agree with Jan. It's chilling. and I like it!! SEVEN

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/25/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thanks,Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2017 3:38:00 PM

Great description Sushma, i found the imagery quite chilling!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/25/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thank you, Jan