a c t cra zy

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H  e  y    y  e  a   h
Won’t you join me tonight
L    e    t   s 
a   c   t   cra    zy 

R   u   n   from my nightmares, hiding inside me
Dissect my thoughts 
Hold me to them
Don’t let me crawl out from under them
 
I’m frighten  f  r  o  m   my illusion’s 
S   t   r  a  p  me down 
Before I  r u n  away
Roll me down 
To the crazy floor
Toss me out and run away
Don’t look back
I’m acting crazy

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Karen Jones

Date: 12/15/2023 11:24:00 PM

Can feel the angst and anxiety. Great to release these emotions.

Paul Murray
Date: 12/16/2023 7:13:00 AM

Thank you definitely a release

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/15/2023 9:48:00 PM

Paul, It's only every so often, perhaps under a blue moon, I look upon a write or a writer's style and think 'wish I had thought of that'. Must be a moon somewhere. But the tense in 'frighten' is activating my almonds. -Richard

Paul Murray
Date: 12/16/2023 7:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for appreciating my effort. I just throw down what I feel it may not always be as elegant as great writers that are here on this site but it’s a healthy release for my pain. Thank you for the moon

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