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Who Am I?

Am I the doormat you wipe your shoes on? Or the cup you drink coffee from? Would it better if I were a cigarette between your fingers, so you crush me when desired, or, light me up so I know the fire and turn, into ashes and to earth, and live for the while I burn? Or shall I be the bag you carry around, to show off the people who surround, Who am I? The one you humiliate for I can't retaliate? Who am I? A robot perhaps with steel limbs and computer chips, or, the one who would one day die?, sealing your immortality among the hi-fi? Who am I?

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Date: 10/4/2010 9:45:00 PM
Deep instrospection here, Rinki...love the metaphors.. Thanks for the comments...will come by again, Rinki...Peace&Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:40:00 AM
~Oh Happy Day~ I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Rinki. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 3:16:00 PM
Who am I? Creative and introspective thoughts that you have penned in this write, rinki
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Date: 10/1/2010 2:27:00 PM
wow, deep and strong words, interesting and good write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:38:00 PM
I like this! Great use of a modern metaphors. I hope, however, that the real answer to your questions is none of these!!
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