Who Am I?

Am I the doormat you wipe your shoes on?
Or the cup you drink coffee from?
Would it better if I were a cigarette between your fingers,
so you crush me when desired, 
or, light me up so I know the fire and turn,
into ashes and to earth,
and live for the while I burn?
Or shall I be the bag you carry around,
to show off the people who surround,
Who am I?
The one you humiliate for I can't retaliate?
Who am I?
A robot perhaps with steel limbs and computer chips,
or, the one who would one day die?,
sealing your immortality among the hi-fi?
Who am I?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:45 PM
Deep instrospection here, Rinki...love the metaphors.. Thanks for the comments...will come by again, Rinki...Peace&Love, Audrey
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October 2, 2010 at 6:40 AM
~Oh Happy Day~ I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Rinki. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Who am I? Creative and introspective thoughts that you have penned in this write, rinki
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October 1, 2010 at 2:27 PM
wow, deep and strong words, interesting and good write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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October 1, 2010 at 1:38 PM
I like this! Great use of a modern metaphors. I hope, however, that the real answer to your questions is none of these!!
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