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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

He'd left them to see the world but was not heard from again. His suitcase - now found - lies packed yet abandoned in their field. Sept. 5, 2017 for nette onclaud's WHITNEY 2 Poetry Contest

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James Inman

Date: 9/18/2017 9:59:00 PM

A great write Andrea, so mysterious.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/16/2017 9:15:00 AM

Still wondering what happened to him, Andrea! Congratulations on your podium finish! Regards // paul

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/12/2017 3:05:00 PM

oh my ...

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/12/2017 1:51:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your placement.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea Hugs Eve

David Mohn

Date: 9/11/2017 9:28:00 PM

Big congrats for making the winners list Andrea

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/11/2017 6:10:00 PM

Back for Congrats!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 5:45:00 PM

Congrats!!! on your win Andrea...well done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2017 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea! You made it into the top three. I was happy to see so many winners in this contest. Happy I didn't get another N/A too. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2017 2:28:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2017 12:49:00 PM

Congrats Andrea!

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations! what a great mystery!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2017 12:17:00 PM

Oh such sad imagery Andrea the final three lines brought a lump to my throat, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 11:05:00 AM

a grand show of cryptic images which caught my attention, andie...i like your twist in the end...showers of congrats and thanks for supporting this spree.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, virgo queen...7 is our number.. huggs

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/9/2017 11:21:00 PM

OMG. I did not know Andrea. Really sorry. Belated birthday wishes. You are an inspiration to me.Hope you had a wonderful birthday...

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 9/9/2017 5:52:00 AM

Happy birthday , Andrea. You and alot of poets in this family keep motivating me. Have a fruitful new year. A deep and lovely poem... like a lot has been said in few words, and like words just can't express all. So deep.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/7/2017 7:04:00 PM

Awesome, Andrea, a winner already Hugs Eve ~`*

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/6/2017 4:15:00 PM

i see a lot of this title, when viewing todays new poems, i'm not up with the contest, so i read your poem from a different mind set, love the last line, a juxtapose, if i ever saw one.

David Mohn

Date: 9/6/2017 11:50:00 AM

...if the picture panned out, you would see the crop circles...just a thought :) love the mystery!

John Lawless

Date: 9/6/2017 9:46:00 AM

OH, C'mon Andrea.....this leaves a huge question mark with that last line....what, where, when, ..... why ... and where the heck is he??? Nicely done "poser".

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/6/2017 8:13:00 AM

wow!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2017 5:04:00 AM

What a melancholy write for Nette's contest! She will love this incredible poem! I went with a happier tone with my entry, the first entry into a contest in probably over 2 years! What a tremendous piece you have written my friend! I surely loved reading your stunning poem this morning! You have done wonderfully with this piece, Great work!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/6/2017 2:10:00 AM

Happy Birthday Andrea! I hope you had a beautiful day! I love your entry. I went sad with mine too. Love, Connie xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/5/2017 9:18:00 PM

Hi Andrea, You done this form well. In a few words you wrote an excellent mystery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest . HAPPY BIRTHDAY! MAY ALL YOU DREAMS COME TRUE:-) ALEXIS

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2017 9:07:00 PM

Wow!