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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

A Mystery

He'd left them to see the world but was not heard from again. His suitcase - now found - lies packed yet abandoned in their field. Sept. 5, 2017 for nette onclaud's WHITNEY 2 Poetry Contest
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Inman Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:59 PM
A great write Andrea, so mysterious.
Callus Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Still wondering what happened to him, Andrea! Congratulations on your podium finish! Regards // paul
Stars Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 3:05 PM
oh my ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 1:51 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your placement.
Roper Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea Hugs Eve
Mohn Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Big congrats for making the winners list Andrea
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Back for Congrats!
Warrior Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Congrats!!! on your win Andrea...well done my friend...god bless...^WW^
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Congratulations Andrea! You made it into the top three. I was happy to see so many winners in this contest. Happy I didn't get another N/A too. : )
Sands Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations Andrea :)
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 12:49 PM
Congrats Andrea!
Webster Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations! what a great mystery!
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Oh such sad imagery Andrea the final three lines brought a lump to my throat, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:05 AM
a grand show of cryptic images which caught my attention, andie...i like your twist in the end...showers of congrats and thanks for supporting this spree.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, virgo queen...7 is our number.. huggs
Kannan Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 11:21 PM
OMG. I did not know Andrea. Really sorry. Belated birthday wishes. You are an inspiration to me.Hope you had a wonderful birthday...
Ogundare Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Happy birthday , Andrea. You and alot of poets in this family keep motivating me. Have a fruitful new year. A deep and lovely poem... like a lot has been said in few words, and like words just can't express all. So deep.
Roper Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Awesome, Andrea, a winner already Hugs Eve ~`*
Horsman Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:15 PM
i see a lot of this title, when viewing todays new poems, i'm not up with the contest, so i read your poem from a different mind set, love the last line, a juxtapose, if i ever saw one.
Mohn Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 11:50 AM
...if the picture panned out, you would see the crop circles...just a thought :) love the mystery!
Lawless Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:46 AM
OH, C'mon Andrea.....this leaves a huge question mark with that last line....what, where, when, ..... why ... and where the heck is he??? Nicely done "poser".
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:13 AM
wow!
Sivey Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:04 AM
What a melancholy write for Nette's contest! She will love this incredible poem! I went with a happier tone with my entry, the first entry into a contest in probably over 2 years! What a tremendous piece you have written my friend! I surely loved reading your stunning poem this morning! You have done wonderfully with this piece, Great work!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Happy Birthday Andrea! I hope you had a beautiful day! I love your entry. I went sad with mine too. Love, Connie xxoo
Y. Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Hi Andrea, You done this form well. In a few words you wrote an excellent mystery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest . HAPPY BIRTHDAY! MAY ALL YOU DREAMS COME TRUE:-) ALEXIS
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Wow!
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