* Water Rippling

Water rippling over the falls, is beautiful music to my soul reminding me God is in control.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/20/2009 5:26:00 PM

good one here dear! Light & Love

Canny Amah

Date: 10/16/2009 8:47:00 PM

This is a sign of hope for a human soul, for human-kind ... water flows like music or poetry ... tanx. Canny.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/15/2009 4:22:00 PM

Lovely...hope you are feeling lots better..it was so nice talking with you..BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/15/2009 4:12:00 PM

God bless you, Rhonda. This is such a lovely haiku! Love and blessings, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2009 4:01:00 PM

Nicely done work. Good thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 10/15/2009 2:22:00 PM

What an uplifting and inspirational poem. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Yes, God is in control and will help us through the tough times. Take care! Karen

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/15/2009 1:37:00 PM

A Beautiful Haiku - Picturesque and Serene ... Glad You Are Feeling Better, Rhonda MoonBee

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/15/2009 9:07:00 AM

Sweetest haiku.. very well penned. All the best.