' Toothy Fruity Faith Ode '

============================================================ Blind...with the beauty and symmetry of nature Can't espy the astonishing and sedate scenes of ardour Just living with the greatest and blindest darkness Imageless and almost senseless... Deaf...with the mellifluous and profound music of amity Can't harken the serene and blithe tune of natural creativity Just living with my own nothingness Dumb and almost senseless... Mute...can't explode feelings and heartstrings through words and expositions Can't speak and expound my real emotions Can't shout out loud, just living with silence - soundless Dumb and almost senseless... Paralyzed...can't accomplish what was desired to achieve Can't act, can’t execute, can’t move - there's no relieve Just living with myself, occupied by loneliness Cripple and now USELESS Balked, feeble, depraved, weak - a YOUNG LOSER Living with the lies through one's teeth? Will never be ... And will never SURRENDER Still BREATHING BELIEVING... KNEELING... PRAYING... ~~~Armed to the TEETH with Faith and Devotion~~~ ============================================================

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Date: 9/21/2011 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of Nancy Jones "A Toothful Ode" Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Jun-jun
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:51:00 AM
jun-jun congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones. CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:22:00 PM
Great work, poem and win. congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:45:00 PM
Love the darkness followed by the bright flash, jun-jun. Awesome write! Thanks for supporting my contest! ~N
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:41:00 PM
CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON A FANTASTIC WIN WITH DYNAMIC POETRY MY FRIEND..LUV..
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Date: 8/20/2011 10:35:00 AM
An emotional verse to fascinate Jun Jun, Have a great weekend.
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Date: 8/14/2011 3:01:00 AM
Nice.. nice... can you believe that i had a hard time trying to post a comment here. It has been over 30 minutes and finally. Your poem finally loaded, well maybe tomorrow. I will figure it out. have a nice one,, and thanks for sharing your poem. I wonder if it is only me~ having trouble here on the soup tonight... take care,..LINDA
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