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Three little sisters

                                                Three little sisters
                                           Could not turn into fishes 
                                              They became women

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/4/2015 7:28:00 AM
The title was so very catching and the image is wonderderful! An excellent haiku my dear friend Rajat. It made me wish that I've biological sister/s joining me in my womanhood. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/3/2015 12:04:00 PM
Hello Rajat! Very nice pen! I truly enjoyed your very unique piece my dear friend Rajat! a 7 from me! Have a very wonderful day! God bless you always! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.""
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Date: 2/3/2015 10:23:00 AM
They became women...but at least they bathed in imagination and had a dream! Very original take! (Hope I do not sound repetitive, Rajat :)) // paul
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Date: 2/2/2015 11:23:00 PM
well, thank heavens they did not become fishes. I enjoyed this inventive haiku, my friend!!
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Date: 2/2/2015 8:16:00 PM
My daddy said son don't worry about that one who got away, there are a lot of fish in the sea.. But these three sisters will never be mine, they became women! :)
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:24:00 PM
i KNOW THEY HAD HIGH HOPES OF BEING THAT FISH!! Enjoyed your work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:23:00 AM
Hey Rajat, a great write. You covered a lifetime in three lines. Well done. Neva
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Neva for visiting.Lovely comments. God bless. Rajat