Three Little Sisters

Three little sisters
                                           Could not turn into fishes 
                                              They became women
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gasun Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:28 AM
The title was so very catching and the image is wonderderful! An excellent haiku my dear friend Rajat. It made me wish that I've biological sister/s joining me in my womanhood. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Hello Rajat! Very nice pen! I truly enjoyed your very unique piece my dear friend Rajat! a 7 from me! Have a very wonderful day! God bless you always! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.""
Callus Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 10:23 AM
They became women...but at least they bathed in imagination and had a dream! Very original take! (Hope I do not sound repetitive, Rajat :)) // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM
well, thank heavens they did not become fishes. I enjoyed this inventive haiku, my friend!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 12:24 PM
i KNOW THEY HAD HIGH HOPES OF BEING THAT FISH!! Enjoyed your work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Romaine Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Hey Rajat, a great write. You covered a lifetime in three lines. Well done. Neva
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Neva for visiting.Lovely comments. God bless. Rajat
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