Three Little Sisters

Three little sisters Could not turn into fishes They became women

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/4/2015 7:28:00 AM

The title was so very catching and the image is wonderderful! An excellent haiku my dear friend Rajat. It made me wish that I've biological sister/s joining me in my womanhood. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/3/2015 12:04:00 PM

Hello Rajat! Very nice pen! I truly enjoyed your very unique piece my dear friend Rajat! a 7 from me! Have a very wonderful day! God bless you always! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.""

Paul Callus

Date: 2/3/2015 10:23:00 AM

They became women...but at least they bathed in imagination and had a dream! Very original take! (Hope I do not sound repetitive, Rajat :)) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2015 11:23:00 PM

well, thank heavens they did not become fishes. I enjoyed this inventive haiku, my friend!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2015 12:24:00 PM

i KNOW THEY HAD HIGH HOPES OF BEING THAT FISH!! Enjoyed your work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Neva Romaine

Date: 2/2/2015 9:23:00 AM

Hey Rajat, a great write. You covered a lifetime in three lines. Well done. Neva

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/2/2015 9:32:00 AM

Thank you Neva for visiting.Lovely comments. God bless. Rajat