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The Sun

The sun finally came out and flirted today It spread its happiness and warmth and made children come out and play. How wonderful it was to see people coming out with smiles on their faces and doing who can mow their lawn first races. The smell of barbeque was in the air all day and night, thankyou sun have a good night

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Date: 6/5/2010 5:00:00 PM
love it! its so creative! can you read mine and tell me what you think. i am new to this site. i am adding this to my faves!!!! keep the juices flowing!!!
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